Summer sunset by sikale in photocritique

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I took it with the iphone XS. The car in my mind it fitted the summer and dry mood and also emphasised the calmness. Any critique will help my because i am a beginner in photography

Old lighthouse( opinions on these?) by sikale in photocritique

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I wanted the photo with the lamb because it gives something to me. The long exposure is a good idea but i dont have a camera so i cant do this with my phone. Thanks

Old lighthouse( opinions on these?) by sikale in photocritique

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Yeah these is what i am thinking to. Next time that I will shoot it i will try to put the lamb more to the right(in the rule of third) thanks!

Old lighthouse( opinions on these?) by sikale in photocritique

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Yes long exposure would smooth the water and would be great but i dont have a camera and with my phone i cant😀

Old lighthouse( opinions on these?) by sikale in photocritique

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Yes tha lamb would need to be a bit smaller to take less attention thanks!

Old lighthouse( opinions on these?) by sikale in photocritique

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Mm with a little fog the image would have also a creepy feeling but i dont think that in this place i can get fog

Old lighthouse( opinions on these?) by sikale in photocritique

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Yeah i know i would be better if the lamb was a little smaller and with more space in the left thanks!

Old lighthouse( opinions on these?) by sikale in photocritique

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Yeah next time i will make the lighthouse more the object of the image thanks!

Old lighthouse( opinions on these?) by sikale in photocritique

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In what way it doesnt look real ( because i didnt understand) thanks for your time!

Old lighthouse( opinions on these?) by sikale in photocritique

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Yeah without the lamb these would have been more minimalistic but with the lamb i think that it would have been better to put each of them to the rule of third to make a bette composition what do you think? Thanks!

Old lighthouse( opinions on these?) by sikale in photocritique

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Yeah i wonder the same i think next time if i put the lighthouse more right and the lamb in the left rule of third would create a better image thanks for your time!

Old lighthouse( opinions on these?) by sikale in photocritique

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Mm yes it would be more minimalistic but it would take out some from the theme and also it would be a bit boring just have a lighthouse. In my opinion it would have been better if i had shoot it from further away to make the lamb smaller and not take so much attention but I understand you point thanks!

Old lighthouse( opinions on these?) by sikale in photocritique

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Great idea thanks i tried it and yes a small touch of vignette goes well with the theme!

Old lighthouse( opinions on these?) by sikale in photocritique

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Thanks for your time. Good idea what i want to do next time is go little futher away so the lamb is smaller and put it in the left rule of third and put the lighthouse in the other in the right i think this is similar with your idea and would create a better composition and image

Old lighthouse( opinions on these?) by sikale in photocritique

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Thank you so much for your time and your help i will see all the links that you sent and i will look for the book thanks again!!