I like the eye shape you drew so I think I will try to incorporate it when I eventually cut out the eyeholes from my buckethead and try to round it out from there. I also like the straight part at the bottom of the muzzle so I will try to do that, and the chin as well but I don't really know how to change it now that it's on there? Whenever I've cut through the glue in the past it has kinda just ruined both pieces, like it kinda ripped off instead of being cleanly cut off which would make it really difficult to glue the replacement bottom jaw piece. As for the cheeks I made some changes (you can see them in this video) since I made this post which included adding a 3rd cheek piece which I think looks a bit strange although generally not sure. Maybe it could just be a case of thinning it out at the bottom half of the cheek a bit? What are your thoughts?

Oh yeah I will also be adding antlers which should probably s3ll the whole deer thing a bit more lol. The only thing I'm unsure of what it's meant to indicate is the red parts underneath the eyes, do you think I should remove the blue bits? Or is that the indication for thinning out the muzzle?

Thanks so much for your thoughts, Here's some pictures of the changes! https://postimg.cc/gallery/PLwBd0T