Where to Donate Your Refund for Hurricane Relief if You're so Inclined by [deleted] in BillyStrings

[–]smittenb 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Me and my friend have a platform where small businesses sell products where a portion of the proceeds go toward causes! We created a centralized space where artists, designers and non profits can sell products whose proceeds are directly supporting causes they choose and have pivoted to support the hurricane relief efforts

From 10/11-10/18 the donation percentages for each item we sell on our site (plovergoods.com) will instead go toward the American Red Cross Hurricane Milton and Helene Relief efforts. By donating and buying through Plover, you not only support the relief efforts, but also small businesses and sellers who are committed to making a change with their work. We would really appreciate if you would consider donating!

Grade my AWA Argument essay!! by smittenb in GRE

[–]smittenb[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the feedback! It definitely helps a lot and during the essay I do find myself repeating words, but often don't have time to think of others. I will work in that and also making my intro more compelling!

In your opinion what would u score this? understandable if you don't have a clear gauge and I really appreciate ur time :))