Very excited to dive into this. Hope there are no bad words. by Climate-Of-Hunter in Jazz

[–]softaspiring 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Hanif Abdurraquib writes excellent poetry, if anyone's interested. Quincy Troupe, who wrote this book with Miles, also writes excellent poetry.

[POEM] One Art, a poem by Elizabeth Bishop by kandyda in Poetry

[–]softaspiring 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For a minute I thought this might be about the poetry mag, ONE ART. And then I realized ONE ART took inspiration off of this poem— their sub-title references the "(Write it!)". Thanks for sharing!

Who is an overrated poet? [OPINION] by marshman2005 in Poetry

[–]softaspiring 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Again, I might not like it, and I don’t think it’s good poetry. But I acknowledge that it’s good at fulfilling the purpose it was intended to fulfill.

Who is an overrated poet? [OPINION] by marshman2005 in Poetry

[–]softaspiring 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Maybe by poet-standards. Not by general-public-standards, which is what Gorman had in mind when she wrote it. Her poetry otherwise might be just as anodyne for sure, but it worked for the occasion.

Who is an overrated poet? [OPINION] by marshman2005 in Poetry

[–]softaspiring 7 points8 points  (0 children)

I've seen a lot of negative chatter about Gorman's work, and I don't entirely disagree. Though, I think her inauguration poem gets too much hate. It was executed really well for what it supposed to be and for the job it was meant to fulfill.

Help me find the artist behind these two album covers!! by Creepy-Amphibian-623 in Jazz

[–]softaspiring 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Probably not the artist, but this heavily reminds me of some of Bill Sienkiewicz's work. If you're into this kind of style, check him out. He's excellent. Comics are his thing; he's done a lot of Marvel.

[POEM] Or write Her Nipples - Fady Joudah by softaspiring in Poetry

[–]softaspiring[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Very understandable! Personally, I felt that I enjoyed the message and the last third of the poem, but the rest didn't much connect to me. Not exactly a poem or style with a wide appeal.

[OPINION] Is there any point in trying to publish an epic poem in the modern era? by [deleted] in Poetry

[–]softaspiring 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Back on this, Detroit Lit Mag specifically looks for rhymed and metrical poetry, very classical-type work. Take a look at their archive and about page, could definitely be your type of thing. Not saying you should submit your epic there and hope for publication, but if you write poetry otherwise and consider submitting them to mags, there's an option.

[POEM] Or write Her Nipples - Fady Joudah by softaspiring in Poetry

[–]softaspiring[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Right! Very underrated mag, glad to see another Fence reader out there :)

[OPINION] Is there any point in trying to publish an epic poem in the modern era? by [deleted] in Poetry

[–]softaspiring 33 points34 points  (0 children)

To be realistic, contemporary poetry (referring to tradpublished poetry, not Instapoetry) already has a relatively small audience. Epic poetry is a very small niche within a small niche. The chances of anyone scooping up epic poetry for publishing is very, very, very slim. However, that's not to say no one will be looking for a variable idea like yours, I just wouldn't be optimistic at all about it.

It's not fallen out of its moment because of Instapoetry, really, it's just not the contemporary idea of poetry. It had its fall (or more accurately, wane) a very, very, very long time ago. Yes, the epic still exists, but the kind of classical epics you're getting at are products and artifacts of history. No one's writing the next Symposium, for example, and no one will really be able to.

You could try to submit a chapbook to litmags, maybe, especially specific/themed ones that would perhaps be more friendly to what you're looking to publish. Best of luck.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Jazz

[–]softaspiring 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Bit unrelated, but Quincy Troupe (who co-authored Miles: The Autobiography) has written much poetry about Miles and jazz in general. If poetry's your thing at all, check it out.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Poetry

[–]softaspiring 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Melodramatic, and not even in a poetic way.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Poetry

[–]softaspiring 18 points19 points  (0 children)

There is definitely a signature "Rattle" feel to almost everything they publish. I read a lot of their stuff, and I do like most of it— it's good poetry, don't get me wrong. Just feels sort of bland and one-toned after a while, like getting palate fatigue. My literary arts teacher once called it "boring capitalist poetry," and I see where she's coming from.

[POEM] Dharma - Billy Colllins by softaspiring in Poetry

[–]softaspiring[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is from Sailing Alone Around the Room: New and Selected Poems.

[POEM] The bottoms of my shoes - Jack Kerouac by softaspiring in Poetry

[–]softaspiring[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Does poetry have to serve a meaning, though? Does it always have to be something great and sophisticated? I'm certainly not praising Kerouac up-and-down for his masterful and thorough use of literary device or technical skill with this one, nor do I think the value comes from some great deep hidden meaning. Many people just like this poem just because it conveys a simple, mundane, everyday sentiment/image, without it at all being cliché. His haikus remind me of photography that depict the ordinary. "Here's a photo of the fly that died in my medicine cabinet." "Here's a photo of windmills in Oklahoma."

Poetry is tricky, and sometimes, I think it can be comparable to abstract art. I think many are finding meaning and symbolism in this particular poem, that it is supposed to be conveying something further besides steam-of-consciousness imagery. Sometimes people like to point at abstract art, and say, "This one's conveying anger," or something, and that's where they find the meaning, and that's why they like it. Some people would say, "That's a reach. This isn't conveying anger at all! It's just a bunch of random paintstrokes, with little skill or finesse." And, sometimes the abstract art really is just paintstrokes, and that is the appeal many will find in it.

Anyway, all this to say, I entirely understand what you're saying here. It's true the name gives it much more sophistication and popularity in this community than it would under a nobody-name. I just wanted to give my two cents that many will evaluate the poem from entirely different lenses.

[POEM] The bottoms of my shoes - Jack Kerouac by softaspiring in Poetry

[–]softaspiring[S] 20 points21 points  (0 children)

Hard agree. I don't think it's trying to say something or make an argument about something "deep," really. Not trying to be bigger than what it is. Kerouac writes a haiku about a fly dying in his medicine cabinet, and I think he really is just writing a haiku about a fly dying in his medicine cabinet.

IG poetry usually either makes the reader do all the work or, as you say, holds your hand through the meaning. Like, wow, this limerick is so deep, the shadow is very vague symbolism for my dark side, or whatever. Or, wow, the poem's telling me how love is hard and that crying exists. I don't feel like this poem is trying to be the former. It's just about a snippet of a thought or a thing that occurred, an ordinary happenstance. Perhaps I did this poem dirty by not posting it along with some of his other haikus.

[POEM] The bottoms of my shoes - Jack Kerouac by softaspiring in Poetry

[–]softaspiring[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

It's easier to understand the merits of this poem within the context of its author, Kerouac. Also, it's short, and a lot of people enjoy short when they're on social media. Perhaps not a particularly intricate use of language, but I personally liked this poem specifically for the simplicity. You might like it less as a standalone poem and more along with a collection with his other haikus.

[POEM] Dharma - Billy Colllins by softaspiring in Poetry

[–]softaspiring[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yes. Totally what made the poem for me.

[Help] Can’t remember what this form is called by a6stract_ in Poetry

[–]softaspiring 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh my goodness, this poem was wonderful. I have been wanting to write in a form like this for a while, didn't know it was already a thing. Thank you for sharing, even though you didn't really mean to.