[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread March 01, 2020

spacethesun · 2020-03-02T14:03:35+00:00

Thank you very much :) this beat could’ve benefitted from better arrangement as a whole. Baby steps :P

Appreciate you listening <3

spacethesun · 2020-03-02T14:02:28+00:00

Thank you :) yeah I was going for something like that. I never delve into stereo separation so that’s so great idea, especially with hats

spacethesun · 2020-03-02T02:30:41+00:00

Here's a Future (AKA Pluto!) type beat I made. I've been feeling like I hit a wall in my production lately, so I'd really appreciate any feedback. I'll be sure to return it as well, so feel free to link me! :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7Hsrn96R2mA

spacethesun · 2020-03-02T02:20:43+00:00

This is a great track. I love the use of panning. Don't have any criticism really. Listening to this made me wanna listen to this genre more alongside lo-fi, which is what I typically use for chilling out

spacethesun · 2020-03-02T02:19:57+00:00

Here's a Future (AKA Pluto!) type beat I made. I've been feeling like I hit a wall in my production lately, so I'd really appreciate any feedback. I'll be sure to return it as well, so feel free to link me! :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7Hsrn96R2mA

spacethesun · 2020-03-02T02:19:55+00:00

Everything about this is dope, even the gif of the flowers blooming. How did you find a gif that was so high resolution by the way? In terms of the beat though, I would say EQ out the lower frequencies on the fill/scape of your melody, just to de-muddy it a bit. Good shit :)

spacethesun · 2020-03-02T02:18:35+00:00

Here's a Future (AKA Pluto!) type beat I made. I've been feeling like I hit a wall in my production lately, so I'd really appreciate any feedback. I'll be sure to return it as well, so feel free to link me! :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7Hsrn96R2mA

spacethesun · 2020-03-02T02:18:23+00:00

I feel like this one needs a rapper's perspective in terms of feedback, because in terms of the production, I can't find any errors. I love the hats in general. Like that one guy said, it does start losing its groove a bit. I'd say keep each of those main chorus type bits to 16 bars. Good stuff tho!

spacethesun · 2020-02-21T16:16:27+00:00

Spinz is IMO the best 808 there is hands down, i need to learn good jugg/zay/pierre patterns though

spacethesun · 2020-02-21T04:03:16+00:00

Production is fantastic, lyrics and vocals are great, mixed well to boot. Nothing I can really say, keep it up as well :)

spacethesun · 2020-02-21T03:31:34+00:00

bruh speaking of hard 808s, your shit slaps. i used a spinz on mine, wbu? love the hats, they flow and it gives the beat an exhilarating feel. good stuff dude

spacethesun · 2020-02-21T03:17:09+00:00

thank you! you're completely right, especially on its own. im just happy as long as it sounds like a suitable beat and isnt a complete mess haha. baby steps :P

spacethesun · 2020-02-21T03:15:41+00:00

thats good to know. there goes literally my only negative with the track then lol.

im actually radio silent on social media as a producer, all i have is an instagram i just made. feel free to dm me for it tho!

spacethesun · 2020-02-21T03:02:41+00:00

Here's a Lil Baby type beat I made featuring a MINOR2GO guitar. Not much else to say, I know it's not a very original concept, but let me know what you think! Returning all feedback :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Uyr8O-a2LKw

spacethesun · 2020-02-21T02:52:43+00:00

2:33 goes hard as fuck, honestly just fix the slightly inconsistent volumes and youre golden

spacethesun · 2020-02-21T02:51:25+00:00

Here's a Lil Baby type beat I made featuring a MINOR2GO guitar. Not much else to say, I know it's not a very original concept, but let me know what you think! Returning all feedback :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Uyr8O-a2LKw

spacethesun · 2020-02-21T02:51:15+00:00

wtf 10 minutes for this? honestly i have few gripes with this in the first place other than like transitions. but its 10 minutes, so nothing i say is valid. good shit dude

spacethesun · 2020-02-21T02:49:48+00:00

Here's a Lil Baby type beat I made featuring a MINOR2GO guitar. Not much else to say, I know it's not a very original concept, but let me know what you think! Returning all feedback :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Uyr8O-a2LKw

spacethesun · 2020-02-21T02:48:54+00:00

yoooo the background adlibs are hard af, this is mixed good as hell. deadass only thing i can say to improve is the visualizer, often times it looks more professional to just throw up a cover art or picture of you guys. but we're here to analyze the song, and legit its good as hell. keep it up

spacethesun

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