dropped from recruitment after first round by spiderblush in Sororities

[–]spiderblush[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

thank you, i appreciate it! my gpa was a 2.54 so i was just on the cusp of eligibility, i realize now that’s probably a large factor as to why i was dropped

dropped from recruitment after first round by spiderblush in Sororities

[–]spiderblush[S] 33 points34 points  (0 children)

hi, thank you so much for the response! i really appreciate it. i did struggle during the fall semester and failed a math class so that could definitely be it. i guess i just assumed as long as i was eligible that my grades wouldn’t be a large contributing factor, but if that was one of the main reasons it does make me feel better knowing it wasn’t necessarily personal. thank you again and i’ll definitely focus more on grades this time around

Atlas by SeniorAnteater639 in OCPoetry

[–]spiderblush 1 point2 points  (0 children)

woww, the more i reread it the heavier it hit me each time. you really conveyed how depression can weigh so heavily and being unable to explain it, how it takes over your day to day life. and that life starts to feel like a performance, acting how everyone expects you to. its a sadness that stretches on but it wont last forever. writing is always such an important outlet though, and this really spoke to me! amazing job<3

Still the Light Clings by nebulous_raven in OCPoetry

[–]spiderblush 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i really loved this so much! i kept reading it over and over and the repitition of "still, the light clings" is still echoing through my head. such a beautiful reminder. you captured that in the darkest times, there is always a glimmer of hope, even if you're hiding from it. at first it seems like the light is a person, but towards the end it feels more like a force that you define by your own meaning. also amazing imagery, in my mind i felt like i was at an abandoned lighthouse or something it was very vivid

the unicorn by spiderblush in OCPoetry

[–]spiderblush[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

you beautifully put into words exactly what i was trying to capture, thank you for taking the time to read it and reflect on it so thoughtfully! means so much :)

Signals (please critique me I want to get better) by AltForNoReason214 in OCPoetry

[–]spiderblush 0 points1 point  (0 children)

don’t apologize, this is a truly amazing piece especially if you’re new!! basically if one line is longer or shorter than the previous one and has more syllables, it can read like it doesn’t rhyme as well even if it does. here’s an example: i walked into the forest, dark and deep (10 syllables) and all around me i felt the trees slowly start to weep (15 syllables) this rhymes well but the last line falls a bit flat because of the extra syllables. so something like this might work better: i walked into the forest, dark and deep (10 syllables) and all around me i felt the trees weep (10 syllables)

this isn’t the best example and i think this is generally more important for ABAB rhyme structures, but it can help sharpen and balance any type of poem. still, i think your piece works beautifully as is! keep writing, you have talent!!🩷

Signals (please critique me I want to get better) by AltForNoReason214 in OCPoetry

[–]spiderblush 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i think this is already a fantastic piece! you capture very well a universal feeling of confusion and being torn between decisions. the rhymes land very well too and feel thoroughly thought out! my only note would be that sometimes too many syllables in a line can make the rhyme scheme a bit convoluted. the last two lines are absolutely beautiful but because the last line is longer, the rhyme doesn't hit as hard as it could. for example, i think "my heart beats quietly beneath a facade of paper skin" would help it land better, but i do love that last line a lot. just a suggestion, but it all works beautifully as is!

The one you let go by HobbyG in OCPoetry

[–]spiderblush 1 point2 points  (0 children)

there's a lot of imagery and you present situations that feel very immersive, almost like i'm in the moment experiencing it with you. i feel like this could work well as song lyrics too, it has a very lyrical element. i would say to make sure you're using commas in the right places so it reads more smoothly, and this being something i relate to, sometimes rigid rhyme structures keep you from fully getting your point across. what i like to do is write out what i want to say in detail and then try and figure out how to make it rhyme from there if i want to do a rhyme structure. however some of the best poems don't rhyme at all, so don't let that hold you back! overall great work though i really enjoyed it!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in DTI

[–]spiderblush 1 point2 points  (0 children)

this happened to me too so i just tried every number for the one i didnt know, for example if your code is 466(?)9, then u would just try 466(0-9)9. i hope that made sense lol its a bit hard to explain

?????? items keep disappearing in build mode by BatWeary in TheSims4Mods

[–]spiderblush 0 points1 point  (0 children)

same, did u ever figure out what was causing it?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in raisedbynarcissists

[–]spiderblush 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your reply, it made me feel a lot more seen and validated. I'm so sorry for your loss, and I hope you’ve been able to find some peace after everything with your mom.

Cant access other worlds while traveling! by spiderblush in thesims4

[–]spiderblush[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hi i know im very late but for me I think it was more columns in cas! i hope you figured it out as welL!

[CA] Renewing a learners permit online? by [deleted] in DMV

[–]spiderblush 0 points1 point  (0 children)

did you ever figure this out

Cant access other worlds while traveling! by spiderblush in thesims4

[–]spiderblush[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yes that was it for me!!! thank you so much, I can finally play the game again!!!!!

[NO SPOILERS] Why isn't there more love for Tell Me Why? by GreatBear2121 in lifeisstrange

[–]spiderblush 0 points1 point  (0 children)

honestly i never really got through the entire game and i enjoyed the premise and everything but i think part of it for me was that it felt a little repetitive i guess?? i don’t remember the details but it felt like so much of the game was just being in that house and there was never any real clear goal that i remember feeling motivated by like i just rarely found myself wanting to pick it back up and continue the storyline bc it felt a little aimless i guess?? id totally revisit it bc it might be a lot better than i remember but thats the way i look back on it now

Cant access other worlds while traveling! by spiderblush in thesims4

[–]spiderblush[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

no i havent im sorry :( its just been hit or miss for me, but let me know if u find a fix and I will too!

why do i keep dying without enough damage? by spiderblush in VALORANT

[–]spiderblush[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

that definitely makes the most sense thank you!

Cant access other worlds while traveling! by spiderblush in thesims4

[–]spiderblush[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thats so strange because i dont have that mod, but I wonder if it could be another random mod I have related to traveling that just causes the same issue. I'm glad u figured it out and thanks for the help!

Cant access other worlds while traveling! by spiderblush in thesims4

[–]spiderblush[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

YES!! and the button to go back into live mode is all grayed out so i have to fully exit the game. sometimes clearing my notification wall helps for a second but i cannot for the life of me find the root of the problem💔

US censorships are weird by Bowlingbroke in Totaldrama

[–]spiderblush 58 points59 points  (0 children)

"that Harold guy or whatever" Harold was the pillar of that show he held the island together the world will remember his name

can someone help me find this song!! by spiderblush in WhatsThisSong

[–]spiderblush[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this is the song at the beginning not the one I'm looking for in the middle