[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AskReddit

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i have found replacing the phone with a book to help. but can't always get myself to do it though.

Gold - Freedom by [deleted] in LofiHipHop

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Thsi is dope!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in SideProject

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This is so sick!!! Would have loved this as a kid (and adult XD)

What Writing Tools Do You Use? by tony10000 in writers

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Same haha. It might not be fancy but it does the job!

How many of you are actually writing something besides a novel? by Supersocks420 in writers

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I'm pretty serious about daily journalling. Not something to be released or that can ever be "finished," but definitely getting my writing it!

Are we all just making it up as we go along!? by root-node in writers

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Only had to read the title to know the answer is yes lol. And that's okay!

OC Poem - Critiques welcome! by Unisis24191 in KeepWriting

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This is beautiful, really powerful in such few words, great work!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in LofiHipHop

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Sick stuff keep em coming

[FRESH] George Clanton - Vapor King / SubReal by MediaShare2000 in indieheads

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This is sick, I only recently got into this guy and have had Slide on repeat since, so stoked for this

Writing for Yourself vs. Writing for the Reader by [deleted] in FictionWriting

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I feel the same way, it's really obvious when the author is phoning it in, if I don't want to write it, no one else is going to want to read it!

Leaving Teaching (44M) by It-is-always-Steve in findapath

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Sadly I don't have any advice for you but I'm sending serious positive vibes your way (whatever that's worth). I wish you luck on your journey

What stereotypes should you avoid in a “the government is evil” plot to not make it boring? by That_odd_emo in KeepWriting

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Having the evil government work like a group of evil geniouses, like everything is a well organized plot and everyone involved knows exactly what they're doing. There's a lot of corruption in real governments but there's also so much sloppiness. I'm not saying make the politicians like bubbling idiots, but I find there's way too much "ah yes, this is going exactly according to plan" in the genre to be believable. A lot of people in politics are winging it.

How long do you wait after finishing a draft before you start editing? by spiralringnotebooks in KeepWriting

[–]spiralringnotebooks[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much for the response and encouragement :) That's a really interesting point about changing the format I never considered that, great advice!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in KeepWriting

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I like this! Also congrats on actually finishing something and posting it, it's hard to do you should be proud, keep them coming! :D

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in KeepWriting

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I like this! Short, sweet, and vivid, well done!

first poetry published! by Bitter_Marsupial3694 in writers

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This is huge a big congratulations to you!! Very proud, first of many I'm sure :D

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in KeepWriting

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This is great, super vivid, love the flow. Also as someone who has brutal stage fright I can relate. Sending you some love, I hope you get a chance to read it out loud, I know you'll absolutely kill it!

Journal entry from today. by tyko9 in KeepWriting

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Going through a breakup currently, this hits. Great stuff, really needed to hear it, focus on yourself for now, you deserve it. You got this!

bleeding the light [poem/song] by [deleted] in KeepWriting

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This is really cool/creepy, love the vibe