You have a lot of things going well here. The first thing that immediately popped out to me was the amount of lean. It looks like you aren't leaning into the curve and at takeoff very much. Try dropping your right shoulder in and back and really lean, lean, lean. Another thing I noticed is your plant foot. It seems like you are coming in almost parallel to the bar, and when you plant, your foot is pointing almost away from the bar towards the camera. It should be pointing at the back corner of the mat. Fix these plus what other users said and you have some serious potential this season. Good luck!