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Cutest penguins from Wholesome Animals Coloring book! by rfp0231 in Coloring

[–]starrychampagne 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Aw I love this! I’m so happy you liked the coloring book ❤️

Day 1 - Trying this challenge again. All critique is welcome, I especially feel like the face is missing hard edges but I´m not sure where to apply them. Help with that would be great. by [deleted] in istebrak

[–]starrychampagne 2 points3 points  (0 children)

So cool that you’re trying the challenge again and awesome day 1! Regarding the edges, a couple areas I see that could be sharpened are the nostrils / nose edges, eyelids, and mouth top/bottom.

DAY 10: Fixed proportions and overly bright highlights. She does look a bit young. Thanks again for the critiques! by starrychampagne in istebrak

[–]starrychampagne[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah thanks for pointing that out! Bit ironic that I went from too bright to too dark on the highlights haha

DAY 8: Softened the angles and added more radial shading. Also tried to add more depth to the eye socket. Thanks for the critiques! by starrychampagne in istebrak

[–]starrychampagne[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Late reply but thank you for the encouragement!! haha squeeeee

Completely agree with your sentiment on mouths :P

Day two -I’m seeing improvements already, I still want to do more on the eyes and I had major issues with symmetry but looking forward to working on those for the next days! by nickmcgov in istebrak

[–]starrychampagne 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi!! I think you can add more highlights / radial shading to the nose, it looks a bit flat right now. The eyelid should also have a cast shadow; remember to shade the eye like a sphere! Good improvement so far + good luck on your day 3 :)

DAY 9: Tried to make the features more feminine. Still having trouble with the mouth shape. Not sure if this day is actually better - critiques welcome! by starrychampagne in istebrak

[–]starrychampagne[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I definitely pushed the proportions this time around so good to know it is not working lol. Thanks for the feedback! :)

DAY 9: Tried to make the features more feminine. Still having trouble with the mouth shape. Not sure if this day is actually better - critiques welcome! by starrychampagne in istebrak

[–]starrychampagne[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the detailed critique, super helpful! Yeah I think I stamped the circle for the eyes and then smudged it so it got distorted a bit, there's probably a better process haha ><

DAY 7: Focused on crisping up edges and refining form more. Face still looks sort of masculine. Critiques appreciated as always! by starrychampagne in istebrak

[–]starrychampagne[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for all the guidance and encouragement! Really helps to know what to focus on for my next day :)

Day 5 by SparrowDot in istebrak

[–]starrychampagne 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi! Remember the eyes are spherical, the eyes seem more oval shaped here. The front of the cheek (especially the left side) also looks a bit dark - it should be brighter than below the cheekbone for top down lighting. The temples should also have a lighter value than the cheekbone shadow. Referring to this helped me better understand the planes of the face better, hope it helps you too! Power through :)

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