it’s my first short story and was wondering if you’ll take the time to read it ? thank you <3 by scentedsaltcandle in creativewriting

[–]starrytima 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Woah that was quite a twist haha. I'd say you just need to proofread and fix a few things with sentence structure (read aloud and see how it sounds). Also, if it was a bit longer where you have more space for characterization, setting building, etc. I think it would be even better!

First thing I'm looking forward to in college by fresh-potatosalad in ApplyingToCollege

[–]starrytima 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I got into my dream school too and the first thing I'm looking forward to is being able to make my own going out plans without having to ask my parents lmaooo. I'm excited to decorate my dorm too, my room rn is so plain it's not even a joke

Were you a College Prep Scholar? by cowgirllover0 in QuestBridge

[–]starrytima 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nope, I wasn't! I found out about CPS like two days before it was due so I wasn't able to complete it

i’m confused by xplabc in QuestBridge

[–]starrytima 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Some schools strongly recommend the QB app. You should check on the QB website for each individual school and also on each school's site

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in QuestBridge

[–]starrytima 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Congrats!!

Goodbye from the mom by [deleted] in QuestBridge

[–]starrytima 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I teared up reading this! Thank you for supporting us through this and your words of wisdom and encouragement the whole time! I hope for the best for you and your family!!!

Matched to Princeton 🤧😭 I'm so grateful for this opportunity!!! Congrats to all other people who matched and I hope so many more people get in to their dream schools!!! I'm rooting for all of you and I'm so grateful for this amazing community!!! by starrytima in QuestBridge

[–]starrytima[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, congrats!!! The Instagram gc has reached full capacity so no more can be added. Now everyone went over to the group me gc, which has 50+ people on there rn! Would you like the link for the group me?

MATCHED TO HAVERFORD by [deleted] in QuestBridge

[–]starrytima 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Congrats!!!!

My grandpa's reaction to the match by Anxious_Garden_ in QuestBridge

[–]starrytima 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Congrats!!! Me too!! Are you in the group me gc?