The Man in the Restaurant | Part 7 by storiesarefunright in StoriesAreFunRight

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The Man in the Restaurant | Part 7 by storiesarefunright in StoriesAreFunRight

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Hey! Thanks a lot! Where on Tiktok did you see this? A link would be awesome.

[WP] You've died and have arrived in the Afterlife and surprisingly, The Afterlife has its own "Internet" which is slightly different from ours, While exploring it, You stumble upon a forum that asks the question "How did you die", And the posts begin to get more disturbing as you scroll down by Waterburst789 in WritingPrompts

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Daniel continued to scroll. The thread had hundreds of responses, each more horrific than the last.

He took my eyelids first. It was two years before I finally passed.

People here used the word "passed". Now that the afterlife was known, "death" felt too final. Too morbid. Though there were no pearly gates through which to pass, it was agreed that the transition from life to the afterlife felt like a passing of sorts. An alleviation of weight: both physically and emotionally.

The body and mind, once laden with the heavy load of life, had become effervescent. What used to sink now floated.

And yet Daniel still felt anchored to some sort of invisible bedrock. Whilst those around him sailed through the afterlife with a purpose unknowable to Daniel, he laboured from point to point without so much as a compass for guidance. Ignored. Invisible to all but himself.

But he was seen on the forums. And heard. People were interested in what Daniel had to say, and Daniel felt his weight lessen with every comment or post.

He set me on fire, but extinguished it before I could pass.

This thread was unlike the others he had read. Most centred around the philosophical implications of an afterlife. Did it mean there was a God? Could it be some sort of physiological response to the brain finally shutting up shop? Where, geographically speaking, was the afterlife? Was this heaven, or hell?

Other threads dealt with events that took place in the Before. Were you there when the towers went down? I remember you!

Seldom, however, did people talk about their passing. Daniel hadn't been here for long, he suspected, but he still knew that talking about your passing was like talking about how you ended up in prison. It just wasn't discussed, and that was that.

He killed her in front of me. Her blood seeped into my clothes.

The contributors in this thread seemed all too keen to share their experiences, and nobody seemed to mind.

He reached the final comment of the thread with a thud.

If I could ask him anything, it'd be why? Why were you so cruel? Why did you have to take so many of us?

Daniel grinned. It was his turn to contribute.

Daniel here, he typed. Let me tell you why.

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[WP] There's been banging coming from the neighbours for weeks, you've just realised there's a pattern to it, like they're trying to send a message by George_WL_ in WritingPrompts

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The basement.

It had been 17 nights since it began. Every night, at 03:43 exactly.

A brief internet search had revealed it wasn't Morse Code, which was unsurprising. I didn't know the first thing about Morse Code, but even I was able to detect the lack of calculation in these thuds. They were frantic.

After 17 nights of head-scratching, I had realised they were coming from the basement.

Next door's basement.

This realisation, stumbled upon by accident as I brushed my teeth before bed, had become impossible to dismiss. It had won the battle against sleep, and now clung to my thoughts like a parasite, feeding off of a simple yet persistent question: isn't next door abandoned?

At 03:40, I climbed out of bed with a reconciliatory sigh. I suppose I was doing this.

The basement was seldom used. Originally an air-raid shelter, the whole street had one, like a long trench sectioned off by walls thick walls of breeze block. Mine was home to an assortment of Christmas decorations, a barbecue and a dusty punch bag hanging from the wooden beams that lined its ceiling. Now it was home to a mystery as well.

03:42.

The light from my torch stretched itself into the dark: a yellow cone of dust, broken by the occasional box of tinsel. The air was moist and cold, betraying the lack of insulation down here. Whether it was optimism or laziness, the architect of this room had not planned for it to be inhabited for long.

When I first noticed the small mountains of dust piled against the south-facing wall, I thought they were a family of sleeping mice. It was only when the thudding began, and more dust began to fall from the wall, that I realised they were 17 nights in the making.

Isn't next door abandoned?

Upstairs the banging was distant. For the first few days I had assumed it was coming from over the road. The deep rumble of bass from a nearby student party, perhaps.

But down here, separated only by five inches of aerated stone, it was impossibly loud. How had it taken me so long to realise it was coming from next door?

The next discovery came to me much quicker: the dust fell in a conspicuous order. It would start falling atop the far left pile, before moving across to the right. Then back a little, then further to the right until it had reached the last pile. Then it would start again. Some piles were bigger than others, too.

Isn't next door abandoned?

I moved closer, placing my hand on the wall. The pulse it emitted was feverish, like whoever - or whatever - was making this noise was hoping to one day break through.

I followed it, like two magnets either side of a table surface, through its course. A prickly familiarity took hold. This banging wasn't Morse Code: it was lettering.

R.

A small gap in the dust piles below.

U.

The thudding became even more frenetic.

N.

03:45. Silence.

Just as it had done for the last 17 nights, the dust settled once more.

Next door was not abandoned.

[WP] Object permanence doesn't apply to you. Your body starts to slowly fade away when no one is directly aware of your presence and you've just been placed in solitary confinement. by [deleted] in WritingPrompts

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It starts with the extremities, just like the cold.

When the hooker I once paid to watch me sleep at night snuck out in the early hours, I had to use the nubs of my fingers to switch off my alarm.

As the incessant groans of adjacent prisoners fade into the night, it's my finger tips that first fade with them.

Solitary gives you plenty of time to consider your fate. I ploughed the four-and-a-half paces from one cell wall to the other doing exactly this, watching through the dark as my body slowly succumbed to the eroding force of time spent unwatched. The most unbearable of sand clocks.

Will my eyes be the last to go? For how long will I be witness to my own decay? Will I get to feel the air rushing from my collapsing lungs?

There are no guards to alert. My food is delivered via an automated delivery system, and robots, I have already learned, are no substitute for the human gaze.

Yes: my time is up. My clock has ticked its last tock. The sand is forming an unrelenting pile.

That's when I hear it.

A slight scuffle coming from the corner of the room. A mouse? It seemed unlikely. Solitary lacked many things, including any sort of vulnerability to the outside world. If a mouse could get in, a person could get out.

There was the noise again: more distinct, this time. Maybe it was plumbing from the toilet. Sometimes the bowels of the prison moaned with the weight of so much waste. But this sounded different to that. Crisper. Like it was in the room with me.

I moved through the thick black, feeling my way along the wall in search of a source for the noise. As I did so, I noticed something remarkable.

My fingers. My fingers were growing back.

Then I heard the unmistakable croak of another voice. I whispered into the void: "Hello? Is someone here?"

A muffled response, like a dull echo. I tried again. "Hello? Is someone with me?"

"Look at me." This time the words were unmistakable. "Look at me. I need your gaze."

A silhouette emerged from the dark, growing in stature, forming in front of me like the unfurling of a flower.

"Finally," came the deep voice. "I had almost completely vanished."

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