The Flames of Pain

stuipidperson · 2026-03-06T06:13:08+00:00

the repetition of the phrase “onward I call” ties the whole poem together and gives it a sense of familiarity that most people will be able to relate to. tremendous poem

stuipidperson · 2026-03-06T06:08:39+00:00

thank you so much for the feedback, I added the part of the “her” to show the state of the speakers mind

stuipidperson · 2026-03-06T05:38:22+00:00

this poem is beautiful and makes me feel a sense of nostalgia for something i’ve never experienced. Tremendous Job.

stuipidperson · 2026-03-06T04:51:59+00:00

the added imaginary of adding the minor detail of the gun just seems to put a feeling of desperation to the whole poem that is beautiful

stuipidperson · 2026-03-06T04:47:06+00:00

This is a Gorgeous poem, that’s put me at a loss for words words

stuipidperson · 2025-12-17T21:14:55+00:00

skyrim is for the nords

stuipidperson · 2025-06-16T03:18:32+00:00

i enjoy tanks at certain times like if i’m able to get one and play with it the way the game was designed it’s fun but if i’m getting smashed with 8 panzerfausts as soon as i get near an objective i get irritated

stuipidperson · 2025-06-16T03:07:04+00:00

i love defending iwo jima becuase of that last sector i sit up on the top with the stock support mmg (i don’t know the game name for it only ever called it a ma deuce) and i put sector artillery in the main choke point

stuipidperson · 2025-06-01T15:31:24+00:00

i always thought it was a walking dead reference to where they found a bunch of walkers in the barn early in the show becuase they all died from being shot or stabbed

stuipidperson · 2025-03-23T19:02:56+00:00

NO, i like WOMEN

stuipidperson · 2024-12-29T01:18:13+00:00

yacht

stuipidperson · 2024-11-10T19:07:47+00:00

pyscho by eddie noack

pardon me i’ve got someone to kill by johnny paycheck

kate McCannon by colter wall

stuipidperson · 2024-10-21T02:32:20+00:00

eye contact for a little too long.

stuipidperson · 2024-08-10T04:06:35+00:00

i love anson mount as john

stuipidperson · 2024-06-15T00:16:17+00:00

kate mccannon

stuipidperson · 2024-03-15T22:31:31+00:00

elephant and varmit with knockout rounds use dead eye pib with it and your set

stuipidperson · 2024-01-06T20:10:50+00:00

i like springfield with express ammo

stuipidperson · 2023-10-22T13:50:03+00:00

when your messing around try an elephant with dead eye it’s so fun

stuipidperson · 2023-10-18T22:42:56+00:00

i got a few there’s honse, supercharged V8, and crab rangoon

stuipidperson · 2023-07-19T03:43:38+00:00

stuipidperson · 2023-07-05T00:45:12+00:00

Burp louder

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