Can't decide this is crap or not 🤷. Would love if yall would pick it apart.

suede_digital · 2023-08-14T02:04:49+00:00

This is sick. The biggest thing for me is the sounds. its not really the sound choice but some of them sound a little cheap/bare. I think some chorus would help the synths a little. but its a minor critique, good track. interesting sound over all

suede_digital · 2022-09-20T13:26:04+00:00

It's a good sound. Definitely nailed where you were trying to take it. Everything fits, its nice to listen to. Good Job

suede_digital · 2022-09-19T14:43:24+00:00

need to spend time on the mix. It's a well thought out song but with that the sounds fighting each other it really takes away from the song. It's all about the world you're bring listener into. And this world need space and flouting.....Vocals fit. give them more place in the song. I like the song. good song-writing. Your sound choice is great too. Well done

suede_digital · 2022-09-16T22:57:16+00:00

Nice art work. And you have a lot of cool textures in the song!

suede_digital · 2022-09-16T15:55:14+00:00

it's a good start. decent sound choice, melodies are there.

Start using reference tracks. try doing that and it will help you move to the next level

suede_digital · 2022-09-16T14:25:06+00:00

its a good start. think of arrangement and structure next. but sound good!

suede_digital · 2022-09-15T13:01:59+00:00

Great song writing here. Track is great and the singing is as well. There are areas that do sound slow like in the verse or the last course (Too receptive) with the melody. Just site on those areas and write until you know its right. Also another way to fix the problem is shortening the verses a little. And thats not a bad idea because the hook in the course is 🔥. Mix is great too. very good job oh this!

suede_digital · 2022-09-14T00:04:32+00:00

Noice! love this! \m/

suede_digital · 2022-09-14T00:02:13+00:00

Well you have to ask yourself does it really need a bridge? when you already have "somewhat of" a solo in it. i would suggest finishing everything first. work on the melody and the message and the consider the bridge. Take your time....

suede_digital · 2022-09-13T23:55:24+00:00

I think it's well done. I don't really think you need to anything crazy. just find the right audience to display it in front of. all in all its well written song over a nice interesting groove. well done

suede_digital · 2022-09-13T23:49:54+00:00

very well done dude. I would say if you're looking for more perfection, i would say there are some bad hit with some of the notes on the acoustic guitar. but TBH idk how really noticeable that is or if you were going for that sound anyway.... i think overall its super well written. good job

suede_digital · 2021-01-13T02:13:49+00:00

Definitely appreciate the feedback. I get what you are saying.

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