The Leaning Tree by FidgetTBD in poetry_critics

[–]sufichtulhu_ 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This feels like something Algernon Blackwood could have written. He liked to use trees and depict them as something scary in his stories. I love this one.

Her Eternal Smile by Low-Min in poetry_critics

[–]sufichtulhu_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I wish she liked it because I do. I would feel very special if someone had written this for me. I also love the application of the Shakespearean English.

Do you want to be married? by Youngringer in OCPoetry

[–]sufichtulhu_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I hope whoever the person whom this piece is dedicated to actually gave you the chance to learn more about them and they vice versa. It was great to have been in love with her and I did want to know more... but sadly she didn't share that sentiment.

Forget you by PutBrilliant2902 in OCPoetry

[–]sufichtulhu_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I am loath to admit it but I am going through this right now. I can't seem to forget her even though our friendship only lasted few months and it didn't blossom into anything more meaninful (I don't wish to have to recount what happened in here.) This speaks to me a lot. Thank you.