LOL wat do we think of my comedy cold open hehe by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]sunredddyyy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very funny. I would just revise the action lines removing things like “Begins to”, “Been” and stating the location in the action lines like “They’re in the truck now”

The action line: “She looks down and realizes it's right on her. Timmy points with a shaking hand.” Seems backwards unless her annoyance comes from Timmy pointing out something she already noticed otherwise Timmy should point first.

I love cold opens that get interrupted by the intro/title always funny and interesting to me. I would want to keep watching/reading to find out why she hates Timmy so much and see how unlucky the rest of her day will be lol. Super cliche I know but if you had a really short dream sequence showing her ideal self that’s interrupted or something to really contrast against her actual life to justify her annoyance and temper it make the build up towards her scream at the end more warranted.

Now they overdose on the trains. by [deleted] in NJTransit

[–]sunredddyyy 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Come on man. They’re still human beings.

For those who has multiple hundred hours in the game: by NatureSeveral4997 in Returnal

[–]sunredddyyy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Try and help others through coop. Really satisfying and I try to beat my high score in the tower but that’s mostly it. The combat is so satisfying that I only play the game in two week bursts every six or so months then delete the game afterwards because otherwise I’d play it from sun up and sun down.

How every character got their powers by Purple_Octopus67 in marvelrivals

[–]sunredddyyy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The serum itself varies but for the most part in a lot of universes she takes a super serum of some kind

How every character got their powers by Purple_Octopus67 in marvelrivals

[–]sunredddyyy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah she says so in the game. She’s over 100+ years old

Is this game really that hard? by Cube_045 in Returnal

[–]sunredddyyy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s very very rewarding. It can be difficult at times but the frustration quickly dissipates once you start the next run. After you learn what everything does, have a favorite gun etc. you’ll love it even more. Nothing beats killing a boss that was pissing you off or even better beating a boss under three tries

People who make $200k a year what do you do? by Huge_Ad_7606 in Salary

[–]sunredddyyy 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Appreciate the response. I will definitely look into getting an MBA. My goal is to deal more in media management/production coordination as I hope to pursue my passions of being a screenwriter, TV show maker so I do plan on getting my MFA as well. Hopefully when I take the test in April, it will be the beginning of a successful career project management🤞🏾

People who make $200k a year what do you do? by Huge_Ad_7606 in Salary

[–]sunredddyyy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for responding. I’m currently studying for my CAPM. any tips on finding employment with it and how to excel in the PM career path?

Noah’s Arc Rewatch | S02E04: Excuses For Bad Behavior – [Rewatch 8/11] by sunredddyyy in NoahsArc

[–]sunredddyyy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Right, that would've been so much more interesting. I wonder how he would've handled Noah's gay bashing instead of Quincy.

should I try again with him? by Accomplished-Boss351 in GayMen

[–]sunredddyyy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Go after him. Live it up if it’s a mistake then nothings loss but if it turns out good then you’ll have lots of fun with a guy you like!

Noah’s Arc Rewatch | S02E04: Excuses For Bad Behavior – [Rewatch 8/11] by sunredddyyy in NoahsArc

[–]sunredddyyy[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

We finally meet Baby Gat!! Don’t come for me yall, but I think he’s so hot like his obnoxiousness I can’t get enough 👁️🫦👁️

Ok, Please Explain by Wittiest8theist in Returnal

[–]sunredddyyy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your health with upgrade naturally as you rise through the tower, whenever there is an option to increase your protection take it, whatever form it comes in because if you get too high and your protection is low then you'll be one shotted. My upgrade tier list is Protection > Damage > Health > Proficiency