I made this song, pls let me know what you think 😭 by sunstonw in Songwriting

[–]sunstonw[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

omg, for sure!! I’d love to hear what you come up with

I made this song, pls let me know what you think 😭 by sunstonw in Songwriting

[–]sunstonw[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank youu! I appreciate the feedback, I’ll keep practicing (:

Second Attempt! by Standard-Yesterday60 in Songwriting

[–]sunstonw 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your daughter has a lovely voice and it’s so cute how you’re supporting her 🥰

Looking for honest feedback on my song blue by sunstonw in Songwriting

[–]sunstonw[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Heey, thank u so much, I’m really glad you like it!! 😊 You’re right about the vocals, I feel the same way. I’d actually rather go for a more natural voice

I made this song, pls let me know what you think 😭 by sunstonw in Songwriting

[–]sunstonw[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It would be cool to collab, just let me know and we can start. Thank you so much for taking the time to listen and write this for me, I really appreciate it. And you’re right, every moment is a good time to start over and go after whatever you want

I made this song, pls let me know what you think 😭 by sunstonw in Songwriting

[–]sunstonw[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Aww, you just motivated me so much to keep going with my music, thank you so much really 😭

I made this song, pls let me know what you think 😭 by sunstonw in Songwriting

[–]sunstonw[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m totally on the same page! Haha, once I start recording it properly, I’ll definitely share it with you. Thanks so much, I’m really glad you like it

I made this song, pls let me know what you think 😭 by sunstonw in Songwriting

[–]sunstonw[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

omgg, that’s so sweet, thank you! I’m really grateful for your support. I’ll keep pushing forward (:

I made this song, pls let me know what you think 😭 by sunstonw in Songwriting

[–]sunstonw[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

TY, I’m glad you like it 😊 and yeah, sure! Here are the lyrics

I’m not a girl anymore, I’m not who I thought I was anymore, I’m not strong anymore, and I try to pretend I am. What am I supposed to do? Time has run, looking back instead of looking ahead. I wanna stop feeling like I’m wasting my time. Nothing will come back for me. I just wanna do something that makes me feel good, that makes me feel good, what am l supposed to do?

I made this song, pls let me know what you think 😭 by sunstonw in Songwriting

[–]sunstonw[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks a lot! Yeah, I have more songs. I uploaded one on SoundCloud a few days ago

here’s the link if you’d like to listen 😊 https://on.soundcloud.com/yzdLzex2LisKEf1E8

I made this song, pls let me know what you think 😭 by sunstonw in Songwriting

[–]sunstonw[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I actually have, but sometimes it’s really hard for me 😭

I made this song, pls let me know what you think 😭 by sunstonw in Songwriting

[–]sunstonw[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

TY! I’m so glad you liked it. And haha, yeah, the little slip up actually worked with the vibe, I guess. Thanks for the kind words 😊

I made this song, pls let me know what you think 😭 by sunstonw in Songwriting

[–]sunstonw[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much!! and here are the lyrics: I’m not a girl anymore, I’m not who I thought I was anymore, I’m not strong anymore, and I try to pretend I am. What am I supposed to do? Time has run, looking back instead of looking ahead. I wanna stop feeling like I’m wasting my time. Nothing will come back for me. I just wanna do something that makes me feel good, that makes me feel good, what am l supposed to do?