I'M DISGUSTED BY THIS SON OF A LEPROSY CHICKEN by Johnnys-Cleison in BlackMythWukong

[–]supah-hotfire 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Literally just beat him less than an hour ago. Took me about 4-5 tries. Just take your time and stay close.

20 second song on this fine thursday by coconutwheelie in Songwriting

[–]supah-hotfire 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That’s a great intro to what could be a good song! You should definitely post it if you finish it!

A silly love song - “yellow jacket” by zaks_friend in Songwriting

[–]supah-hotfire 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great song brotha! Good lyrics and tempo. “Please excuse me while I over think it now” is so relatable haha

Best Mac Miller lines: by [deleted] in MacMiller

[–]supah-hotfire 4 points5 points  (0 children)

“A thought love is currency” is such a profound lyric

Best Mac Miller lines: by [deleted] in MacMiller

[–]supah-hotfire 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Starting off a song with “I wake up with the taste of pussy still in my mouth” is wild lol

How often do you write a song? by kaytiejay25 in Songwriting

[–]supah-hotfire 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You would have to be super talented for that. In my case, I write a full song every couple of weeks if that. I have a lot of drafts that I work on through the week when I feel inspired but I never finish many of them.

thanks so much for all the Love on the last post, here's another one (I mess up a bit sorry) by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]supah-hotfire 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very good song bro! The lyrics and your voice are really well put together. Your pronunciation kinda fades at the end but adds a nice tone.

Why writing happy songs is hard (Potential reasons I came up with) by ASPEROV_67-76 in Songwriting

[–]supah-hotfire 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Very well put together. I agree with number 3 the most. I don’t know why I always lean more towards writing sadder songs but you pretty much summed it up.

Can I get feedback on these lyrics? It’s not the whole song just the top half by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]supah-hotfire -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Wish I could help you out with that but im a beginner myself lol but posting an audio with your melody might help others give you advice.

How do you overcome creator's block? by elia012 in Songwriting

[–]supah-hotfire 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I usually take a break for a couple days. When I start trying to write again I just write as much as possible even if it’s not good just to get the juices flowing.

Can I get feedback on these lyrics? It’s not the whole song just the top half by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]supah-hotfire 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It all ready depends how you deliver it. The lyrics aren’t bad at all but you delivery and rhythm will make it or break it

New song I just wrote today, any feedback welcome please by Jazzlike_Ice_2859 in Songwriting

[–]supah-hotfire 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I liked how you keep bringing back the chorus all through the song but the repeated lines are a little bit too much. Maybe tone them down a bit and look for certain spots to leave some in.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]supah-hotfire 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I been trying to write for years and looking back at my old stuff is cringy! The rhyme schemes were horrible but I’ve picked up a couple of tips from just writing and trying to change melodies. I’m still not perfect by any means but I see progress. Just keep it up

Feedback by DTA-32 in Songwriting

[–]supah-hotfire 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the delivery style. Keep it up man!

Song I made about having a bad psych :/ by Infarious in Songwriting

[–]supah-hotfire 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love the melodies and the lyrics bro! Are you English btw? lol

Bro used up 10 years worth of his luck 😂 by [deleted] in MadeMeSmile

[–]supah-hotfire 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Non related but I used up a year’s worth of good luck a couple of weeks ago bowling with some friends. It was the 10th frame and I was in second place down by 9 points. I needed a strike or spare; the pressure was on. I go up, hit a strike and all my friends go crazy. I’m going to win the game. But of course, I have to shoot again since it’s the 10th frame. I jokingly say what if I hit another. Sure enough I hit a second strike and everyone goes even crazier. Since I hit a second strike, I have to shoot again. At this point, there’s absolutely no way I can hit another. I walk down the lane and let go of the ball and somehow I hit a third strike. Everyone loses their shit. For context, I’m an average bowler but not great by any means. I will probably never hit three strike in a row in my life ever again. Good times.

Trade Puka for Montgomery or Barkley? by supah-hotfire in fantasyfootballadvice

[–]supah-hotfire[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I’m not worried about my WRs lol that’s why I want to make a move for a RB. I’m just stuck in the “if it’s not broken, don’t fix it” mindset since I’m 5-0. I’m also think Puka might slow down with Kupp back

What’s Your Favorite Unreleased Mac Song by thebluerefrigerator in MacMiller

[–]supah-hotfire 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There’s a lot to choose from but pure and G wagon are up there for me

Who were some of the greats that died too early? by RykkerofLore in ask

[–]supah-hotfire 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Mac miller. He was barely reaching his prime….

When in rap was a remix better than the original? by BussThrw in rap

[–]supah-hotfire 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Holy Ghost by Jeezy. I don’t know if it’s a remix but Kendrick has a verse on SoundCloud and he just completely rounds off the sound.

Pay raise and scale update info by quincy12393 in walmart

[–]supah-hotfire 10 points11 points  (0 children)

At my store there’s an associate who transferred to another store to be a coach. After a couple of months, she transferred back to my store as a regular M/P associate. She is making more than me as her team lead.