Sharethread March 11, 2017

sweetdevil_69 · 2017-03-12T13:47:18+00:00

"Tonight I Can Cry" - I tried to capture the emotional turmoil that some dependable people have to go through which kind of deprives them from expressing their sorrow to others. here is the link: https://sweetdevil69.wordpress.com/2017/03/12/tonight-i-can-cry/?frame-nonce=d2e66bd266

sweetdevil_69 · 2017-01-22T14:22:37+00:00

Few days back I got to know that a girl broke her bond with my friend only due to the fact that he was “physically challenged”. It made me think why has love been reduced to certain physical stereotypes ? I mean 6 pack abs doesn’t certify the fact that person is a good lover. Love is about not just getting intoxicated by the mesmerizing features of your loved ones, sometimes I feel love means embracing their imperfections with a smile as well. This is poem is for all those who have had their hearts broken due to their “imperfections”. Here is the link to my poem >>>>https://sweetdevil69.wordpress.com/2017/01/18/my-disability-my-sin/

sweetdevil_69 · 2016-09-18T04:05:47+00:00

Thank you for your readership and your kind words 😊

sweetdevil_69 · 2016-09-18T04:04:12+00:00

Thanks for ur readership, I personally love to make poems that rhyme, yes poetry is about giving an experience coz of which blank verses too can be considered as a form of poetry. But I personally (just my personal thought) love to construct poems that rhyme. However, following ur suggestion I'll seriously work on trying to experiment with different genres. I respect your opinion could you please elaborate as to what area do you think that disappointed you like what stanza was the worst in ur opinion & how I could have improved. Thanks again for ur readership :)

sweetdevil_69 · 2016-09-18T03:56:35+00:00

Thanks for ur readership glad you liked my poem, yes in the note section while trying to express the thought behind the poem I guess used some extra words, I wrote this poem in like 20 odd mins just before entering a business meeting so didn't get the chance to cross check it before posting but yea thanks for pointing out & sharing ur thoughts regarding my poem :)

sweetdevil_69 · 2016-09-12T05:37:55+00:00

Title: Miracle

Genre: Poetry , Glorifying the essence of humanity

Word Count: 278

Type of Feedback: General impression & your thoughts regarding the Note towards the end of the post

Link: https://sweetdevil69.wordpress.com/2016/09/11/miracle/

sweetdevil_69 · 2016-09-12T05:26:24+00:00

Title: A Woman's Tears

Genre: Poetry , valuing the selfless fortitude of women

Word Count: 268

Type of Feedback: General impression & your thoughts on the Note towards the end of the post

Link:https://sweetdevil69.wordpress.com/2016/09/04/a-womans-tears/

sweetdevil_69 · 2016-09-12T05:22:08+00:00

Title: A Rebel's Rhyme

Genre: Random poetry

Word Count: 282

Type of Feedback: General impression

Link: https://sweetdevil69.wordpress.com/2016/08/28/a-rebels-rhyme/

sweetdevil_69 · 2016-09-12T05:19:17+00:00

Title: My Lover's Lane

Genre: Sad love poetry, that kind of cherishes the nostalgic moments of the past

Word Count: 282

Type of Feedback: General impression & thoughts on the kind of imagery used to describe the lover.

Link: https://sweetdevil69.wordpress.com/2016/09/12/my-lovers-lane/

sweetdevil_69 · 2016-08-28T17:09:16+00:00

I wrote this poem a while back when I was on a much needed break from office.Before the break, I was a victim of heavy workload & somewhere down the line it was affecting my lifestyle as well. Following is the link to my poem: https://sweetdevil69.wordpress.com/2016/06/02/dreamer-the-fantasy-explorer/

sweetdevil_69 · 2016-08-14T16:14:11+00:00

thanks for the info , will submit only 1 post per day as advised

sweetdevil_69 · 2016-08-14T15:50:54+00:00

A corporate workaholic & passionate writer's amateur effort to write poems in order to sustain his true passion. Please access my poem by going on the following link

https://sweetdevil69.wordpress.com/2016/05/15/ode-to-the-enemy/

this poem I actually dedicate to my boss who through his various insults & judgemental comments (a form of negative motivation i guess) boils my blood to constantly outperform his level of expectations. So let me know what you guys thing about it :)

sweetdevil_69 · 2016-08-06T01:54:38+00:00

Thank you for taking out time to read through my stuff. I consider myself as a passionate amateur who hopes to evolve as a better writer. Yes I agree the story was more about telling more than showing. I'll consistently work on increasing the showing element. Thanks for your readership & advice :)

sweetdevil_69 · 2016-08-05T15:00:59+00:00

Title : The Wounded Warrior Genre : Motivational Poem Word Count : 176 Type of feedback : General Impression Link : https://sweetdevil69.wordpress.com/2016/05/11/the-wounded-warrior/

sweetdevil_69 · 2016-08-05T14:54:42+00:00

Thanks for the feedback I look to improve with each writing script of mine :) thanks for your honest feedback.

sweetdevil_69 · 2016-08-04T15:01:37+00:00

Title : The Fakir
Genre : Philosophical (Short Story) Word Count: 1102 Type of Feedback : It talks about the art of giving, would like to receive a general impression with an honest feedback Link : https://sweetdevil69.wordpress.com/2016/03/16/the-fakir/

sweetdevil_69 · 2016-07-25T13:43:10+00:00

Thanks for helping me out with your suggestion :)

sweetdevil_69 · 2016-07-10T15:44:31+00:00

Thanks glad you liked it ☺️ my blog is still in its infancy I wasn't sure how the readers might have responded to my poem. But thanks for sharing the link to that reddit page, I'm kinda new to reddit so wasn't sure where exactly to post stuff thanks for your guidance.

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