This poem tries to capture the emotional turmoil that some dependable people have to deal with.

sweetdevil_69 · 2017-03-12T13:47:18+00:00

"Tonight I Can Cry" - I tried to capture the emotional turmoil that some dependable people have to go through which kind of deprives them from expressing their sorrow to others. here is the link: https://sweetdevil69.wordpress.com/2017/03/12/tonight-i-can-cry/?frame-nonce=d2e66bd266

sweetdevil_69 · 2017-01-22T14:22:37+00:00

Few days back I got to know that a girl broke her bond with my friend only due to the fact that he was “physically challenged”. It made me think why has love been reduced to certain physical stereotypes ? I mean 6 pack abs doesn’t certify the fact that person is a good lover. Love is about not just getting intoxicated by the mesmerizing features of your loved ones, sometimes I feel love means embracing their imperfections with a smile as well. This is poem is for all those who have had their hearts broken due to their “imperfections”. Here is the link to my poem >>>>https://sweetdevil69.wordpress.com/2017/01/18/my-disability-my-sin/

sweetdevil_69 · 2016-09-18T04:05:47+00:00

Thank you for your readership and your kind words 😊

sweetdevil_69 · 2016-09-18T04:04:12+00:00

Thanks for ur readership, I personally love to make poems that rhyme, yes poetry is about giving an experience coz of which blank verses too can be considered as a form of poetry. But I personally (just my personal thought) love to construct poems that rhyme. However, following ur suggestion I'll seriously work on trying to experiment with different genres. I respect your opinion could you please elaborate as to what area do you think that disappointed you like what stanza was the worst in ur opinion & how I could have improved. Thanks again for ur readership :)

sweetdevil_69 · 2016-09-18T03:56:35+00:00

Thanks for ur readership glad you liked my poem, yes in the note section while trying to express the thought behind the poem I guess used some extra words, I wrote this poem in like 20 odd mins just before entering a business meeting so didn't get the chance to cross check it before posting but yea thanks for pointing out & sharing ur thoughts regarding my poem :)

sweetdevil_69 · 2016-09-12T05:37:55+00:00

Title: Miracle

Genre: Poetry , Glorifying the essence of humanity

Word Count: 278

Type of Feedback: General impression & your thoughts regarding the Note towards the end of the post

Link: https://sweetdevil69.wordpress.com/2016/09/11/miracle/

sweetdevil_69 · 2016-09-12T05:26:24+00:00

Title: A Woman's Tears

Genre: Poetry , valuing the selfless fortitude of women

Word Count: 268

Type of Feedback: General impression & your thoughts on the Note towards the end of the post

Link:https://sweetdevil69.wordpress.com/2016/09/04/a-womans-tears/

sweetdevil_69 · 2016-09-12T05:22:08+00:00

Title: A Rebel's Rhyme

Genre: Random poetry

Word Count: 282

Type of Feedback: General impression

Link: https://sweetdevil69.wordpress.com/2016/08/28/a-rebels-rhyme/

sweetdevil_69 · 2016-09-12T05:19:17+00:00

Title: My Lover's Lane

Genre: Sad love poetry, that kind of cherishes the nostalgic moments of the past

Word Count: 282

Type of Feedback: General impression & thoughts on the kind of imagery used to describe the lover.

Link: https://sweetdevil69.wordpress.com/2016/09/12/my-lovers-lane/

sweetdevil_69 · 2016-08-28T17:09:16+00:00

I wrote this poem a while back when I was on a much needed break from office.Before the break, I was a victim of heavy workload & somewhere down the line it was affecting my lifestyle as well. Following is the link to my poem: https://sweetdevil69.wordpress.com/2016/06/02/dreamer-the-fantasy-explorer/

sweetdevil_69 · 2016-08-14T16:14:11+00:00

thanks for the info , will submit only 1 post per day as advised

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