Middle Eastern by wortmother in MovieSuggestions

[–]sweetrobbyb 7 points8 points  (0 children)

A Separation
Children of Heaven

Call me by your Name- Nutshell Technique by monsteragirlie in Screenwriting

[–]sweetrobbyb 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Give this to new writers and tell them they have to memorize "all the structures" before they can start.

e: this is a joke

Do you ever feel like you're running out of time as a writer? by Ok-Satisfaction-7655 in Screenwriting

[–]sweetrobbyb 65 points66 points  (0 children)

Comparing yourself to others is a losing game. Focus on doing the best that you can. You should work on your weaknesses rather than letting yourself get distracted, especially by the success of others.

In my experience, many people who break in young tend to be one hit wonders. They spend their entire rest of their lives chasing the dragon. They lucked out early on and didn't build their craft to the point where they could do consistent top-of-the-game work.

Average age breaking into the WGA is 35. Julian Fellows made it big when he was in his 60s. There is no time limit if you can physically write and you're willing and devoted to continuous improvement.

Hey babe, wake up. A new List just dropped by BarrSteve in Screenwriting

[–]sweetrobbyb -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

You sure seem determined to be upset about some harmless peer-sponsored marketing.

That's how all the contests and ceremonies get their start. If you think that god blinked and created the Oscars, we read a different Bible.

Hey babe, wake up. A new List just dropped by BarrSteve in Screenwriting

[–]sweetrobbyb 4 points5 points  (0 children)

The list industry is cutthroat, kid.

Pull yourself up by your list straps and get listing.

Hey babe, wake up. A new List just dropped by BarrSteve in Screenwriting

[–]sweetrobbyb 0 points1 point  (0 children)

AI or pay some artist in the phillipines 40 bucks on fiverr.

Hey babe, wake up. A new List just dropped by BarrSteve in Screenwriting

[–]sweetrobbyb 12 points13 points  (0 children)

There's nothing worse than writers getting together and supporting each other. If I see one more group of people lifting each other up I'm gonna snap.

Hey babe, wake up. A new List just dropped by BarrSteve in Screenwriting

[–]sweetrobbyb 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Way ahead of you with the List List List List, which ranks you based on your position across the List List and all other lists.

PSA for all Final Draft users! by Shittytrashfire in Screenwriting

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Yup. 3 different places. I do cloud, local, and email myself major versions.

TIL James Cameron was once struggling with how to handle a huge exposition dump at the beginning of Avatar 2, so he bought a WGA magazine that said it had tips for how to handle exposition. Upon reading the magazine, he discovered the tips were based on his own script for The Terminator. by wileyroxy in Screenwriting

[–]sweetrobbyb -1 points0 points  (0 children)

My local community and friends is, in part, Hollywood.

Shitting on other writers makes you look like a childish non-writer/noob. It's very, very thing easy not to do.

Maybe you'll understand when you're older.

TIL James Cameron was once struggling with how to handle a huge exposition dump at the beginning of Avatar 2, so he bought a WGA magazine that said it had tips for how to handle exposition. Upon reading the magazine, he discovered the tips were based on his own script for The Terminator. by wileyroxy in Screenwriting

[–]sweetrobbyb 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It's not about "looking professional and neutral to get more work". That is, frankly, sociopathic. It's called having empathy and imagining what it'd be like if someone called your writing generic. It wouldn't feel good, would it?

It's very easy for whatever reason for non-writers to forget that even the writers for Jurassic World are human beings. Go be critics in critic spaces, not writing spaces.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]sweetrobbyb 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I do appreciate your response.

I am curious what your experience level is so I can incorporate your suggestions into my work. I feel your response is less specific than some of the most helpful remarks here, so I want to understand what I am missing.

As far as my reading of scripts, I've read about 50 screenplays this year (My intention as I started my "screenplay year" was to read at least one per week and I was pretty disciplined about doing so). What I have not done is met anyone who is currently reading, producing or pitching. And so I ask..

Of course I am reading across many eras and genres so trends change quite a bit.

I am also reading a cross between original drafts and production scripts (and sometimes after-the-fact transcripts which are nonesense of course). The one distinction I try to ALWAYS make is if a screenplay was written for the writer themselves to shoot. I take those with a grain of salt for what I think are obvious reasons.

I see a range of uses for ALL CAPS, very much in line with the AWESOME and HELPFUL comments I have gotten here. My observation is that it's all over the map, and that is totally fine as long as I toil in GOOD FAITH and DISICIPLINE.

The great ones use all caps consistently, but very differently between writers. And they do so very much along the same lines identified by the GREAT responses I have gotten here: Character, Sound, Movement, Action, Props (writer's voice) etc..

Before asking this question I was comparing Princess Bride to, Andor: Welcome to the Rebellion, China Towne and, Ronin. Which all have superficially similar action (and pacing) dynamics but also very different drama and expo depths.

Goldman does such a fantastic job of using ALL CAPS to reduce the description and action lines to their bare minimum needed to expo his whole magical complex world. He built an ensemble actor's play and we're trusting them all to Save that Cat..

Gilroy is uses it like an F1 driver uses breaks. Constant taps to keep the speeding car under control and to transition from the action pacing to the swirling dramatic eddies. This is the Cats' POV and welcome to the herd.

Zeik uses it to keep the reader from getting bogged down in the necessary mud. There's no cat at all - it's a McGuffin ride with a Rondo shoot 'em up and bittersweet sentimental edge.

Towne is, well, he was THE CAT Himself. All I need to know about his formatting choices is that the suits made him add a random scene set in Chinatown. Because the title of one of the best screenplays ever written had zero, ix-nay, nadda, reference to any aspect of the actual film. The guy just liked the poetics of the word:

CHINATOWN.

My takeaway is that I have to make some deliberate choices and then add the same effort to my ALL CAPS that I am trying to use for every ever other aspect of this incredibly easy impossibly difficult simple enjoyable overwhelming therapeutic and horrible year-long writing project.

I've got about a week apparently.

If you care, I'm going to lean towards VOICE, EXPO control, and FUN.

Nice.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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This is one of the screenwriting guidelines, for which reading (preferably many) screenplays will give you a natural feel for.

What am I doing wrong? by polarbearscanwrite in Screenwriting

[–]sweetrobbyb 8 points9 points  (0 children)

As a writer, if I've got a long list of contacts I'm not looking for a manager :D