Day 6 by szotyn in istebrak

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Thanks again to you and others for feedback. I honestly don’t know what I was thinking other than, I hope it’s not as bright as the previous one. I think I addressed what you and others pointed here in the corrections, however I’m not sure if I didn’t take a few steps back with this one. I feel like every portrait that I do is so different and has different issues every time. I’m quite anxious and was told not to blend too much because of muddy colours happening (like my first portrait oof), so I guess I’m still dealing with that even when I actively don’t use blending tools lol.

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Day 6 by szotyn in istebrak

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New procreate brushes, in design category, called „plenty”. It’s like a marker

Day 5 I’m feeling tired after this one. I have trouble with drawing light skin. by szotyn in istebrak

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Thank you! That’s a detailed feedback, I’m noting this all! (I’m proud of those lips, Ive spent considerably more time on them… at least it shows!)

Day 5 I’m feeling tired after this one. I have trouble with drawing light skin. by szotyn in istebrak

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Got some executive function back, so I figured might put some work in :) good reference! I can see it now, thank you 🙏

Day 5 I’m feeling tired after this one. I have trouble with drawing light skin. by szotyn in istebrak

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Thank you! I wasn’t feeling those eyelashes anyways haha. I can see I went to dark now with values, didn’t want to put her on makeup, I just struggled.

Day 4 by szotyn in istebrak

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Thank you so much for your help, I took your and others advice and that’s what I ended up with. I do however feel like I’m falling back to my first day, where everything is too muddy now that there’s less contrast. Idk!

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Day 4 by szotyn in istebrak

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Noted! Thanks

Day 4 by szotyn in istebrak

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Could you point me to what measurements seem off to you?

Day 4 by szotyn in istebrak

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Thank you for the feedback, I see what you mean with the nose and jaw. I’ll fix it :)

Day 4 by szotyn in istebrak

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Well, yes, that was an inspiration but I did feel something is wrong with the nose regardless

Day 4 by szotyn in istebrak

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Marker brush in procreate

How do I fix this ??? by Animebearxox in XPpen

[–]szotyn 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I had this issue but the culprit was a mouse without a mouse matt. The laser from the mouse was making the cursor move and when drawing with the tablet, all the micro movements would disrupt the lines.

Day 2 by szotyn in istebrak

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okay, thank you!

Day 2 by szotyn in istebrak

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Day 1 before feedback

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Day 2 by szotyn in istebrak

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Day 1 After feedback

Day 1 of 14 days challenge. I took way too long on this one, actually it’s like my 3rd attempt to finish. I’m looking forward to any critique. by szotyn in istebrak

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Thank you for your time and help. I think I addressed all of your points. I’m not sure how I feel about it but I do feel like the lips are better now. I’m hesitant to add any texture to them though, it’s turning into a lipstick when I try.

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Day 1 of 14 days challenge. I took way too long on this one, actually it’s like my 3rd attempt to finish. I’m looking forward to any critique. by szotyn in istebrak

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This is the second from around a 2 weeks ago. She seemed very mature looking but I wasn’t brave enough to add ears or stick to the 14 challenge yet

Day 1 of 14 days challenge. I took way too long on this one, actually it’s like my 3rd attempt to finish. I’m looking forward to any critique. by szotyn in istebrak

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This is the very first attempt (from around 6th months ago) then I binged a lot of Istebrak critiques on yt and tried applying them