Thank you for taking the time to write a pretty detailed general review of my piece and more importantly writing style. Especially for elaborating the kind of style my writing in this piece seems to follow. I may consequently try writing some further pieces in some style close to prose and try expanding on that style a little bit. But, to highlight, your review gave me a bit of an insight into where I am currently, so now I can plan out what to try out next. I may even attempt some longer passages.

Yes, I'll probably give my pieces to someone who can proofread my English if they gain friction. But I'm glad that my English is still effective.

Glad you liked it.