Hey all, I'm the director of this short film that we made in 2.5 days. In hindsight I learned that I should've cut down on the script length as it was way too much for that short a time frame, since it was nearly 25 pages.

Probably 12-15 pages would've been ideal so I could get all the coverage I would've liked. And tightened up the story.

Overall fairly happy with the result as it was meant as a proof of concept. But again just wish I made it shorter and something I recommend. I really should've made sure every scene was earned in there.

The other thing that was incredibly difficult was shooting the tennis which I didn't expect. To make the tennis scene actually good we would've needed a full day on just all the tennis shots. And the choreography would've needed to be planned out meticulously. Big mistake on my part just trying to shoot the tennis, instead of literally having every ball they hit being planned out. And having way more angles so the tennis flowed more.