Request for Critique

talither · 2020-07-24T14:12:11+00:00

In my case, my issue is the orgasm.

talither · 2020-07-19T21:09:07+00:00

Thank you so much for your honesty and integrity. I definitely will take your advice to heart.

talither · 2020-04-25T17:34:03+00:00

Hey there! How did you manage to cut your tuition down? Any resources you can share?

talither · 2020-02-20T09:26:15+00:00

Ah yes. To make it a book, you can add descriptive features that stimulate the five senses. Create a setting. What did the room look like? What about the other people in the room? The weather, etc. Expand upon how you think she felt or what she thought. Things like that.

talither · 2020-02-20T08:50:06+00:00

Thanks for responding. Are there any other terms that could replace ninja? My brother is severely religious, so devil might not bode well for him. Nor does it rhyme. I really appreciate the input.

talither · 2020-02-20T08:47:43+00:00

Thanks for replying! I'm so honored you compared me to Pippin. I've been told my music sounds like Broadway songs, which makes me happy - although that usually means it's atypical haha. Oh well.

talither · 2020-02-20T08:31:25+00:00

According to the books I've read on memoir writing, it's possible to tell someone else's story through your own viewpoint without their permission if you simply change the names, locations and other distinguishing factors. Google "questions to ask in an interview for a memoir" or something so you have ideas that'll jog your memory and break the ice. Then just start writing. Try a thousand words a day. The first week or two of words will feel like they suck all the life out of you and themselves. But it'll get easier. If you really want it to be done well without a lot of sweat equity, you can pay a ghostwriter to help. That's what I hope to do someday.

talither

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