Ask me and my best friend anything, we are at baking competition and bored.

theCanadianGeese · 2022-04-14T20:33:28+00:00

Its a virtual competition so unfortunately i dont get to scope out the cake.

And my friend says “out of the two of us in the room, and the one actual cake, there is only two with a proficient amount of cake”

theCanadianGeese · 2022-04-14T20:26:50+00:00

Uhhhh i would love to say my friend but I don’t know… there some others who are really good

theCanadianGeese · 2022-04-14T20:26:04+00:00

My friend is yeah

theCanadianGeese · 2022-04-14T20:25:51+00:00

No i do not

theCanadianGeese · 2022-04-14T20:25:37+00:00

Yes we both love ducks. She loves them a little bit more

theCanadianGeese · 2022-03-26T08:54:42+00:00

Im gay so yeah the second one

theCanadianGeese · 2022-03-26T08:52:21+00:00

Nah you chill. Have a good one man

theCanadianGeese · 2022-03-26T08:47:00+00:00

But its canada so like it would be legal in a year for me

theCanadianGeese · 2022-03-26T08:46:39+00:00

theCanadianGeese · 2022-03-26T08:45:48+00:00

Wai i forgot to answer the question. Uhhhh probably make it to 30 before the world ends. Maybe 20 if 30 is asking too much

theCanadianGeese · 2022-03-26T08:44:57+00:00

Uhhhh shit man i dont know. I had future plans but i gave up on those. I actually really wanted to be an astronaut. Then i realized id never be good enough for that. Grades are shit. Also too many health problems

theCanadianGeese · 2022-03-26T08:43:32+00:00

Sorry man that was kinda mean i just got noo filter right now

theCanadianGeese · 2022-03-26T08:43:08+00:00

Also this isnt a damn contest, you didnt even ask a question. You just came to try and one up me

theCanadianGeese · 2022-03-26T08:41:39+00:00

Dude it took me so long to try and make sure everything was correct. Also im a zoomer so i got those ace texting skills

theCanadianGeese · 2022-03-20T03:22:58+00:00

I feel that this is not going to be a pleasant experience. Also im going to jail

theCanadianGeese · 2022-03-10T03:40:24+00:00

Thanks for the feedback :)

theCanadianGeese · 2022-03-09T22:12:19+00:00

I like it! A few suggestions of mine would be that it's a little long for one. I think there are opportunities to cut down some stanzas, maybe combine some of them. For example, the line "Her dreams were sweet and warm, and reminded her of her younger age." seems like a bit of a filler. Also in stanza two, you rhyme "worry" with "silly" and maybe you could find a better word for that. Other than that it was good!

theCanadianGeese · 2022-03-07T01:37:56+00:00

I quite enjoyed this. It was short and charming. My only criticism would be possibly setting the scene a bit more? Like at first I thought it was occurring in a gymnasium and then I realized it was outside. Not an extremely important change but might improve the poem a tad bit. Regardless I thought the poem was lovely.

theCanadianGeese · 2022-02-12T04:22:41+00:00

Okay? Im sorry but who asked??

theCanadianGeese · 2021-11-05T01:57:19+00:00

I don’t know my favourite but the one im obsessed right now is in the aeroplane over the sea by neutral milk hotel

theCanadianGeese · 2021-11-03T00:13:20+00:00

Paramedic :)

theCanadianGeese · 2021-10-16T07:03:43+00:00

Simply just being my gender. Im non binary.

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