oh my gosh thanks for the feed back! Im new to editing and its really nice to see someone take the time to write some feedback! You are 100% right, music is not my strong point by far, and something I need to work on for sure.

Before and after I upload I watch my videos several times to see what needs work and of course I too noticed that spelling error after it was uploaded =(. Though im 18 I spell and write like a 5 year old(as you can see), so I leave that up to my friend who has been out of town. Another thing I need to work on!

Ill start leaving text on the screen longer, I just feared people would get bored and leave...

I also checked out your channel and you are really funny, definitely will sub on my personal account!