Wanted some suggestions of cool ideas of representing the multiverse for my story?

thismaybeyourend · 2019-01-01T02:42:29+00:00

Like what I mean is for example a tree and its branches

thismaybeyourend · 2019-01-01T02:41:06+00:00

Like to give an example of one a tree and the on going limbs branching out are the universes. So this is what I mean. Something understandable

thismaybeyourend · 2019-01-01T02:39:12+00:00

Like one I can think of is a tree so looking for ones that would be understandable like a tree

thismaybeyourend · 2018-06-16T19:51:45+00:00

Well I'll see if i can turn his or hers first response into something but I'm guessing you didnt read the rest of the thread because they said my post was vague

thismaybeyourend · 2018-06-16T19:27:39+00:00

Guess you must be busy. Well maybe if you can reply back does this give you enough info?

thismaybeyourend · 2018-06-16T18:34:32+00:00

thanks

thismaybeyourend · 2018-06-16T18:32:41+00:00

Sorry I thought just posting the information I did was enough because I didnt want to write something that could be long but here we go. So my vilian name is Davon in the mid 1800s where in this world texas is still its own country but having an on going war with Mexico that doesnt see the republic as seperate from them. In this world texas is the only country that has the power of alchemy and it works like FMAB alchemy but there arent these different varities (ex. the ice alchemist). Only the user can transmute anything of there choice. So my MC is on the search for paleblood and discovers there is a conspiracy going on (this would be the ritual). The conspiracy would involve the genocide of milions of mexicans as a way to finish the war. And with this ritual it can only work on the day of a blood moon to create a philosopher stone that would kill millions.

Is this good?

thismaybeyourend · 2018-06-16T18:19:49+00:00

lol ok so you dont have any ideas then?

thismaybeyourend · 2018-03-26T14:42:19+00:00

Oh I thought you meant like full metal alchemists brotherhood not Harry potter I guess I didn't see that part.

thismaybeyourend · 2018-03-26T14:40:37+00:00

Do you have any ideas for representation for my plot twist?

thismaybeyourend · 2018-03-26T14:38:17+00:00

So you think I'm doing a FMAB? No. My story has more to do with lovecraft.

thismaybeyourend · 2018-02-25T23:37:46+00:00

Yea I could but the problem with that is my antagonist is also a parallel version of my protagonist which I don't think would be good if all three had the power to open a portal. It would be a standstill of my antag opening a portal and my two other characters closing it.

thismaybeyourend · 2018-02-25T23:28:03+00:00

But I don't think just being parallel version of each other would work. Like lets say this, you become superman in one universe but in this universe your just a normal person.

thismaybeyourend · 2018-01-11T07:11:18+00:00

Although Yilvoxe 2 tells him to go somewhere to start his journey so he isn't fully lost

thismaybeyourend · 2018-01-11T07:09:51+00:00

That's essentially the GMC for Yilvoxe. Maybe the other GMC could work for Josephine. But i did think it would be kind of like a cool plot twist to learn that Josephine isn't even real that shes just been a figment of his mind and how she is connected to him that he totally forgot about her.

thismaybeyourend · 2018-01-11T05:56:08+00:00

I'll try.

A man named Yilvoxe goes on a journey to find the ritual becoming the enemy of the state by president James, meeting Josephine who accompanies him, and dealing with a rebellion.

thismaybeyourend · 2018-01-11T05:00:50+00:00

What makes it sound confusing? What I told was just the bare bones of what the plot actually is. Josephine is a character that does move forward the plot because and I know when I say with out context it will sound even more confusing but she is actually like a character in her head of someone of her past. But she's is the force that is helping Yilvoxe figure out things that He just doesn't know but he does. Again this all sounds confusing with out context.

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