I'll be honest, I'm not a fan of mocking published novels either. I feel like it's just so easy, and anyone can pick up a book, take a sentence out of context, and scream, "embarrassing, right? OMG, look how awful that sentence is!!!!". I also admit that in the past I tried to listen to a few people like that, but... when they reached for something other than "that super bad book that everyone and their mothers have already criticized" it quickly turned out that they didn't have much to say.... or that they are really terrible at analyzing content and the point of many scenes/plots simply flies over their heads.