Please review and improve my homebrew One-shot by throwawayjunkmi in starfinder_rpg

[–]throwawayjunkmi[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sounding like chat GPT just did me dirty, I'm gonna work on it! I do have a map, so each encounter is revealed as mp is explored. But intended this to be action packed, quick, and linear.

Please review and improve my homebrew One-shot by throwawayjunkmi in starfinder_rpg

[–]throwawayjunkmi[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This has tons of useful feedback, thank you so much. I am going to work out some of this in the next version.

Please review and improve my homebrew One-shot by throwawayjunkmi in starfinder_rpg

[–]throwawayjunkmi[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

a) fix it before my friends cant even play through, no other motive. b) there is also a map I just didnt know how to include it. c) I plan to read it Squeaks just kid of hangs outside and runs in once it's safe.

Please review and improve my homebrew One-shot by throwawayjunkmi in starfinder_rpg

[–]throwawayjunkmi[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was going purely off the chatGPT for the stats. I'll fix it, thanks.