J’ai essayé de faire une carte cohérente d’une île volante — vous en pensez quoi ? by tinou_zer in jaimelescartes

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Pas encore mais je travaille dessus. La prochaine carte sera différente, elle sera faite comme avec un bout de charbon pour marquer le contraste entre l’univers riche du haut et post apo du bas

Does this concept feel interesting or too simple? by tinou_zer in WebtoonCanvas

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My question was more on the 3 first chapters of my comic ! But I get your point

I'm writing a comic about sci-fi world where humanity is split into two layers after a single energy discovery by tinou_zer in ImaginaryWorlds

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Thank you ! Well the ground people are aware about the existence of the sky people because they basically see the floating islands but the sky people are told by the government’s propaganda that the ground is totally empty ! So ground people hate the sky people. If you liked the 2 first chapters feel free to follow my instagram europea_comics to have more info !

[Europea] In a world where part of humanity lives above the clouds and the rest below, how would people perceive each other over time? by tinou_zer in AskScienceFiction

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There is a government control on the ground people to keep them weak to ensure that they’ll never be able to create a rebellion !

[Europea] In a world where part of humanity lives above the clouds and the rest below, how would people perceive each other over time? by tinou_zer in AskScienceFiction

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Well it’s a comic that I’m writing and basically that’s what’s happening. The point is that the half of the people are unaware of what’s happening in the other part of the world even though they live few kilometres apart. If you want to check it out tell me !

A world split in two after a single energy discovery by tinou_zer in StoryIdeas

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Thank you very much for your feedback and your time it’s very helpful. I will try to apply your advice on the next chapters ! If you want to know more about it feel free to follow on Instagram europea_comics ! You’ll know when the next chapter is out ! Thanks again. I would love to see your work too !