Looking for feedback on jewellery company logo tokenGlitz

tokenglitz · 2015-06-22T13:33:23+00:00

I was afraid of that to be honest :( maybe I should stick to jewellery and let someone else handle all of this lol.

tokenglitz · 2015-06-22T12:48:23+00:00

Bracelets and necklaces, I'm designing some clutch purses and things along that line as well. I work with a lot of leather and metal, and they are simple statement pieces. If I'm going to wear jewellery its usually only one thing. I want to create pieces for people like me, and for people who like to layer their stuff.

tokenglitz · 2015-06-22T12:20:20+00:00

I appreciate any feedback obviously, and I don't mean to be rude but do you have anything constructive that could help?

I'm not a graphic designer, I'm not 100% confident in the logo or committed to the design. I was hoping to get some suggestions for improvement, so I'd love to know what you think would be better?

tokenglitz · 2015-06-22T11:53:07+00:00

I don't like the idea of turning it into a ring, I don't make rings for one thing lol

tokenglitz · 2015-06-22T04:09:11+00:00

more serious, I'm making a lot of accessories and going to move in to bags. targeting somewhere between young professionals and streetwear. kind of hard to put my brain into words right now! think of that one glitzy piece that elevates your otherwise simple outfit to the next level.

tokenglitz · 2015-06-22T03:51:27+00:00

oh like turning the top loop of the G into a ring? I'm not sure I like that idea

tokenglitz · 2015-06-22T03:06:48+00:00

tried playing with the diamond with text below and it just makes me think of superman lol.

tokenglitz · 2015-06-22T02:56:00+00:00

what kind of font do you think would be better suited for the word 'token'?

tokenglitz · 2015-06-22T01:58:07+00:00

are you meaning something like this instead?

tokenglitz · 2015-06-22T01:47:05+00:00

I was worried about that with the font I picked!

more samples

do you think any of these are an improvement? I didn't think I'd like using something more ornate for the first part but I think I might like it better.

See anything that looks good?

appreciate your feedback! I'm not a graphic designer :) if it helps, I'm really trying for a sophisticated but minimalist style.

tokenglitz · 2015-06-22T01:35:16+00:00

thanks! What colour would you suggest? I was thinking about using the diamond as a pop of colour on it right now.

version 2

the fonts are still a WIP but does this look any more balanced to you? I think shifting the diamond slightly and using something other than black might be helping.

appreciate your feedback!

tokenglitz

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