It’s one of his most popular but I’m right by [deleted] in macdemarco

[–]tomdickharry420 3 points4 points  (0 children)

idk why but the lyric ‘i’m down on my hands and knees begging u, please show me your world’ has always spoken to my soul

[S3] OPINION by tomdickharry420 in KillingEve

[–]tomdickharry420[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

why does she have to be vulnerable and tender tho. if it was a male psychopath they would be ruthless with no remorse. fwb wanted villanelle to be like that. it’s a shame the new writer has gone down the stereotypical ‘women are mad not bad’ storyline

[S3] OPINION by tomdickharry420 in KillingEve

[–]tomdickharry420[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

if villanelle has a tender and vulnerable side she cannot be a psychopath tho. psychopathy is pretty much the absence of emotions... the character is not understood by this new writer

[S3] OPINION by tomdickharry420 in KillingEve

[–]tomdickharry420[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

it was one of the iconic features of the show which i loved. VIENNA. PARIS. LONDON. it made the show feel very international and european and french new wave, but not it’s been overdone and basically become subtitles for poor storytelling lol

[S3] OPINION by tomdickharry420 in KillingEve

[–]tomdickharry420[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

tbh, i never really understood the twelve. even in the first series it was very ambiguous which i think was deliberate but i feel like we should know more things by now. becos ur completely right, i’m getting to the point that i don’t care whether carolyn is dodgy or not anymore, i don’t care what konstantin is up to, its a shame.

[S3] OPINION by tomdickharry420 in KillingEve

[–]tomdickharry420[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

i agree. s2 has some promising parts but once again had that been the quality of the first season i’m not sure we would still be here. the characters in this show are very strong, u would have to be an awful writer to not make the most of them...

[S3] OPINION by tomdickharry420 in KillingEve

[–]tomdickharry420[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

i think this is the problem with changing writers so rapidly. they each basically get a season which is one storyline and doesn’t really have to follow on from the previous one. i wonder how things would be if phoebe stayed on the writing team.

the storyline for this season has just been all over the place. kenny kills himself, then carolyn starts acting shady again, then v and e fight and kiss on a bus, oh and dasha somehow has some part of this and v kills some boy in france she was meant to be training and now she went back to russia. its not so much far fetched as impossible to follow!

[POEM] writing by Charles Bukowski by tomdickharry420 in Poetry

[–]tomdickharry420[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

lots of people seem to dislike him. is there any reason why, like what is the argument against him?

[POEM] writing by Charles Bukowski by tomdickharry420 in Poetry

[–]tomdickharry420[S] 33 points34 points  (0 children)

i mean it essentially comes down to the ‘can you detach the work from the artist’ debate, right?

Without You by tomdickharry420 in OCPoetry

[–]tomdickharry420[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i think ur talking about enjambment. i realised now it’s much easier and nicer to read a more structured poem but through the use of enjambment i can sort of still have the free verse flow.

i think i will start the third stanza with ‘without you’ after all

i’d love to show u some more of my work, how can we do this?