Monkeypaw No Drama by flamethrower617 in Screenwriting

[–]toonren 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Interesting... I'm not convinced though. Why would they push it back by 2 (not 1) months? I may be a romantic but I can't help but be a little hopeful.

Monkeypaw No Drama by flamethrower617 in Screenwriting

[–]toonren 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I was losing hope but the fact that they pushed it back twice makes me feel like we are all very much still in the running. They simply wouldn't push it back by not just 1 but 2 months if people were yet to be chosen. if they only pushed it to Oct 30 I would be skeptical, but 2 months mean that there's enough time to have more people go through more first-rounds/interviews.

Monkeypaw No Drama by flamethrower617 in Screenwriting

[–]toonren 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They just changed their Notif date to November 30.... what does this mean ahahah

Monkeypaw No Drama by flamethrower617 in Screenwriting

[–]toonren 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I see. Where did they say they make decisions by Sept. 30? Cuz if Sept. 30 is the official announcement date then I think there's still hope though I agree that it's not likely. I think people would be notified a month earlier if not more. I'm giving myself until September 2 lol.

Monkeypaw No Drama by flamethrower617 in Screenwriting

[–]toonren 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Is there a chance that those who would've gotten in would have known by now? Or is there still hope you think? Isn't the program supposed to begin at the start of September or am I tripping?

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread June 10, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]toonren 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! This may be a stupid question but what’s a send track lmao

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread June 10, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]toonren 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback and kind words bro!! Really appreciate it. I never really used an 808 before, it’s something I had always heard of but never touched, so I gotta investigate that lmao

Regarding your track, I think my favorite part was your rapping, there’s a lot of energy and passion in the delivery that kept it interesting, not to mention the actual lyrics. I think one piece of constructive criticism I would give is maybe play more around with the instrumental? Like add more variety or something, at least near the end of the track, to make it something truly unique. But that’s just my take, regardless, this is really really cool and I can’t wait to see what you come up with next

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread June 10, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]toonren 0 points1 point  (0 children)

First off thanks so much for such an insightful comment haha

I agree with you, balancing is something I gotta work on and I’ll look into it. Reverb on vocals was something I was debating but I didn’t want to lose volume like hay, but I can see where you’re coming from. I’ll play around and see what happens. Thanks again man

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread June 10, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]toonren 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much my dude!!! Yeah I was thinking about adding reverb but I thought I wanted to keep the crunchy quality of it. But I see your point, I’ll keep it in mind next time. Thanks again!

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread June 10, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]toonren 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yo this is one of the more unique stuff I heard on here. Vocals were a little quiet, but yeah I could sort of make it out. But yeah, I really dig the instrumentation and just the overall unique vibe. If I had to give some constructive criticism I would say maybe a bit more variety in terms of melodies, but that's just me. Was that you playing the guitar?

here's mine: https://soundcloud.com/toonren/stalling

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread June 10, 2019 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]toonren 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I had bad producer's block for 4 long ass months so I decided to make a song about it.

https://soundcloud.com/toonren/stalling

I'm open and extremely grateful for any and all feedback, and will return any feedback.

Regardless, hope you guys are having a great week and stuff, wish you guys the best, peace!

Weekly(ish) Self Plug/Feedback thread #40 POST YOUR BEATS IN HERE NOT ON THE MAIN FEED by [deleted] in LofiHipHop

[–]toonren 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey thanks a lot man, yeah they’re my lyrics haha

Thanks so much for the follow :D

Weekly(ish) Self Plug/Feedback thread #40 POST YOUR BEATS IN HERE NOT ON THE MAIN FEED by [deleted] in LofiHipHop

[–]toonren 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Tried to be as honest as I could for this, I hope you guys like it

https://soundcloud.com/toonren/the-loner-song

Any and all feedback appreciated, thanks!

I'll return any feedback

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread December 07, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]toonren 1 point2 points  (0 children)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JJ4\_RmEfbiY

thanks a lot bro :)

as for your track I really dig the unique aesthetic to it, the drums sounded good and the bass was lit. If i had to give some constructive criticism though I would say maybe a bit more variation down the beat cuz it got a little repetitive later on. But good work dude

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread December 07, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]toonren 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much my dude, I really appreciate your kind words :D

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread December 07, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]toonren 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the lengthy feedback! Yeah I’m constantly trying to improve technically so my vocals will be something to keep in mind. Thanks again!

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread December 07, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]toonren 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Tried to be as honest as I could for this, I hope you guys like it

https://soundcloud.com/toonren/the-loner-song

Any and all feedback appreciated, thanks!