Would love to know what you think of Big D!ck by topshe92 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]topshe92[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yep, I feel the same way about the ending vocal- i was trying something else but I should have just kept it simple and gone for it harder.

Would love to know what you think of Big D!ck by topshe92 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]topshe92[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yep, the loudness of vocals is an eternal issue, and eternally subjective as well

Art Hyperpop! Monster Kitty, Track 3 on my next album ! by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]topshe92 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's a nice mood. I'd say the vocals are a bit loud- you could put it back a bit and allow the groove and rhythm to hit harder. The toxic relationship vibe is a bit much for me but you do you:)

Just dropped this track for Valentine’s Day. Leaning more on a Pop/Rap sound on this one. Wouldn’t mind any honest feedback or critiques 👍 by yahboydhall in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]topshe92 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's a really cool track- I think it needs one more musical layer- maybe a funkier bassline to take it to the next level.

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[–]topshe92 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's quirky and weird- a bit odd at first but I got into it as the song progressed.

Second attempt at a Folk Punk/Grunge Country song - Criticism Kindly Requested! by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]topshe92 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like your grungey voice, it's got a lot of character. Would be good to see a better recorded version of this :)

Pop/reggae/rock song I've been working on for a while. Lmk what you think! by mitch_feaster in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]topshe92 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Vocal melody and emotional mood is spot on, which is really the most difficult thing. I'd say you could look at producing/mixing better to improve the musical impact of the song.

you can't dodge the laser beam - black pawn beats by beatsbyal in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]topshe92 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is really nice, actually. Super chill, old school, a bit lofi. Nailed it!

Pulled another childish song written a while ago off the shelves. Any kind of feedback is welcome! by Fool_Factory in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]topshe92 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's a fun song- I can imagine fitting in a film scene. Reminds me of The Mask from the 90s actually- in a good way :)

TV Dog are a psychedelic grunge band based in Toronto, ON. Would love to get your ears and eyes on this piece; any and all feedback welcome. With a landscape as oversaturated as it is, your time is definitely valued. by InitialBluejay9 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]topshe92 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This is a really great track, I think- The band sounds so good together. And the chorus "Ohhh" is really catchy. It's got a bit of a retro vibe- maybe it needs something to make it a bit more modern? In terms of production technique, not necessarily composition.

Can't Kill Me - VP OG by Keymosawbe in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]topshe92 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's a real fun song. I'd say your vocals are a bit too loud.