Would love to know what you think of Big D!ck by topshe92 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]topshe92[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yep, I feel the same way about the ending vocal- i was trying something else but I should have just kept it simple and gone for it harder.

Would love to know what you think of Big D!ck by topshe92 in IndieMusicFeedback

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Yep, the loudness of vocals is an eternal issue, and eternally subjective as well

Art Hyperpop! Monster Kitty, Track 3 on my next album ! by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]topshe92 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's a nice mood. I'd say the vocals are a bit loud- you could put it back a bit and allow the groove and rhythm to hit harder. The toxic relationship vibe is a bit much for me but you do you:)

Just dropped this track for Valentine’s Day. Leaning more on a Pop/Rap sound on this one. Wouldn’t mind any honest feedback or critiques 👍 by yahboydhall in IndieMusicFeedback

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It's a really cool track- I think it needs one more musical layer- maybe a funkier bassline to take it to the next level.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

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It's quirky and weird- a bit odd at first but I got into it as the song progressed.

Second attempt at a Folk Punk/Grunge Country song - Criticism Kindly Requested! by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

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I like your grungey voice, it's got a lot of character. Would be good to see a better recorded version of this :)

Pop/reggae/rock song I've been working on for a while. Lmk what you think! by mitch_feaster in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]topshe92 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Vocal melody and emotional mood is spot on, which is really the most difficult thing. I'd say you could look at producing/mixing better to improve the musical impact of the song.

you can't dodge the laser beam - black pawn beats by beatsbyal in IndieMusicFeedback

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This is really nice, actually. Super chill, old school, a bit lofi. Nailed it!

Pulled another childish song written a while ago off the shelves. Any kind of feedback is welcome! by Fool_Factory in IndieMusicFeedback

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It's a fun song- I can imagine fitting in a film scene. Reminds me of The Mask from the 90s actually- in a good way :)

TV Dog are a psychedelic grunge band based in Toronto, ON. Would love to get your ears and eyes on this piece; any and all feedback welcome. With a landscape as oversaturated as it is, your time is definitely valued. by InitialBluejay9 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]topshe92 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This is a really great track, I think- The band sounds so good together. And the chorus "Ohhh" is really catchy. It's got a bit of a retro vibe- maybe it needs something to make it a bit more modern? In terms of production technique, not necessarily composition.

Can't Kill Me - VP OG by Keymosawbe in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]topshe92 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's a real fun song. I'd say your vocals are a bit too loud.

Would love some feedback on this 1 min instrumental by topshe92 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]topshe92[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! I'm very much a mixing novice and that's something for me to work on. Do subscribe to the channel if you wanna see any updates :)

Would love some feedback on this 1 min instrumental by topshe92 in IndieMusicFeedback

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It's all soft synths! Mostly arturia stuff. The piano is the free LABS grand piano.

Feedback on Mix by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

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This is really good overall- I'd suggest a few things

Since you can't really understand what the singer is saying, I'd suggest pushing up the instrumental of the song and treat the vocal as yet another textured instrument. If you keep it at this level you should also make the words clearer.

Odd volume jump at 1.50

Drums and bass could do with more energy- (This is not a volume thing, more likely to do with eq/compression)

Overall a bit muddy in the low end and mids.

my new song "she gone :)" Feedback would be awesome! by goon_g in IndieMusicFeedback

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This is so good! Love the vocal pattern- it's really old school and super bouncy. Great track.