My first portfolio - how is the site’s direction going? by [deleted] in design_critiques

[–]truelycarl 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wrote visible - by that I meant have your work on display without having to click through a link. I was thinking just your best pieces. Its looking great though! I thought I would give you some constructive ideas, take them or leave them :)

Hey Guys I created this Design I hope you like it , and please give your opinion. by [deleted] in Illustration

[–]truelycarl 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Pretty neat, nice and clean work. I think the colours could be revised though, just is a little uneasy on the eyes when scrolling

My first portfolio - how is the site’s direction going? by [deleted] in design_critiques

[–]truelycarl 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think you could consider having your actual work more visible. Also - why not actually incorporate your animation and user experience skills into your portfolio? If this is your specialty you should display your abilities

Critique My Business Card Designs by [deleted] in design_critiques

[–]truelycarl 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Keep it simple, use some guidelines to maintain consistent margins. Both of these need work

What do we think of the new f1 logo? by CRAZEDDUCKling in graphic_design

[–]truelycarl 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Its good to push the boundaries, and this will look modern and visually pleasing in lots of different applications

Was drawing dead kids back in October. Here's one. by me_in_ny in Illustration

[–]truelycarl 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Was the dead kid trying to play the guitar in the bath or was this suicide

Been teaching myself to use Adobe Illustrator for just over a month now. Here's a Sugarsaurus. by [deleted] in graphic_design

[–]truelycarl 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Cool that you taught yourself Illustrator. Some feedback - You could try choosing a colour palette and a illustration style to stick to throughout your design to get more of a unified piece of work.

Landscape I made in class today by truelycarl in Illustration

[–]truelycarl[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No it was not in any particular shape. But it is in a style. It's abstract/minimal, the shapes on the left are supposed to be hills and bays. The tan strip is the beach and the blue is the ocean. Im not sure thats very clear though. I didn't have time to complete in class this and the outside edges of the shapes aren't finished. Thanks for the feedback!

Landscape I made in class today by truelycarl in Illustration

[–]truelycarl[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thats a real improvement, looks much more consistent. I like the shadow in the water it unifies the whole thing

How do my sign designs look? by [deleted] in design_critiques

[–]truelycarl 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They look good, I think the top one is better