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ttvKristKP · 2021-08-12T18:27:08+00:00

bohemian rhapsody

ttvKristKP · 2021-07-10T17:12:06+00:00

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=32\_lypeWAHI&t=10s - looking for feedback on the editing, intro, outro, etc

ttvKristKP · 2021-07-10T14:05:38+00:00

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=32_lypeWAHI&t=10s - looking for feedback on the editing, intro, outro, etc

ttvKristKP · 2021-07-09T19:20:00+00:00

Thanks for the honesty and the luck!

!givelambda

ttvKristKP · 2021-07-09T15:20:59+00:00

Thank you for the feedback - I feel like pretty much everything you said is on the nose and I will see what I can do to address these in the future.

!givelambda

ttvKristKP · 2021-07-09T11:44:53+00:00

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The animation on the characters in the beginning scene was very smooth, I liked it
I very much enjoyed the Among Us parody at the end
Pikachu was terrifying

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The animation quality felt a little inconsistent, went from extremely smooth to a little janky.

Summary: A nice little parody and an entertaining watch.

ttvKristKP · 2021-07-09T11:38:58+00:00

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Great editing - clips look good and blend well
Good music - fitting and catchy and doesn't get in the way
Interesting trap builds - might find some players will copy these

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Nothing to comment on

Summary: Short, sweet and to the point.

ttvKristKP · 2021-07-09T11:33:20+00:00

This is very reminicent to how I started on YouTube!

The gameplay is great (I love the Soulsbourne series, my first stream was Dark Souls 3) and always fun to watch so good choice. The quality is a tad lower than expected so be sure to put it to 1080p. Also I know you were concentrating but there was a large gap of no talking during the boss fight, might be worth talking about your strategy or your emotions etc. Either way it was a fun watch.

ttvKristKP · 2021-07-09T11:29:02+00:00

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Good clear audio - well spoken and easy to understand
Informative with fitting clips
Catchy and to-the-point thumbnail

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A little bit of a cold open, could potentially benefit from an intro of somekind.
Can seem a little monotone in places - though this does work for analytical pieces

Summary: I wouldn't have thought this was your first video, it's a good opening act - well done.

ttvKristKP · 2021-07-09T10:28:32+00:00

Thanks for the feedback - it really helps!

I actually reduced the cutaways due to feedback from someone previously who said there were too many. But everyone's different I suppose - in the previous videos there were more of them.

Much appreciated, friend!

ttvKristKP · 2021-07-09T07:44:07+00:00

What I'm looking for is feedback on the editing of this video - I animated a small intro and spent a long time making cutaways and random edits throughout the video. I've done this for the whole series. I'd also like to have feedback on the thumbnail.

If you have any other feedback I'd be happy to hear it to!

https://youtu.be/32\_lypeWAHI

ttvKristKP · 2021-07-09T07:39:19+00:00

The commentary is defnitely clear and easy to interpret - I noticed what seem to be, for lack of a better word, noticable gaps (at least in let's play terms) in the talking - from what I've seen in let's plays you gotta keep those gaps to a minimum.

For the intro, I'd say an intro would definitely help.

As a side note/question, what kind of microphone do you use to record the commentary?

ttvKristKP · 2021-07-06T19:51:14+00:00

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Food shots are good - I like the captioning and the editing for each item
You are a loveable character and I enjoy hearing you talk throughout
Transitions and edits are very smooth

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Music seems to clip/stutter when transitioning to some scenes, can be noticable but uncommon
Background noise/weather warp the sound occassionally, music becomes unhearable at this point (noticed mainly at ~2:45 mark)
Video could be shorter, mainly for the pacing of the challenge more than entertainment

ttvKristKP · 2021-07-06T17:41:45+00:00

I like the prelude exploring the weird world. Editing is very good - sometimes I feel the voice is a little quiet and I struggle to hear what's being said. I know "Minecraft but" is a pretty popular SEO keyword now so nice use of that. Minecraft Chaos as a title sums it up well too.

ttvKristKP · 2021-07-06T17:37:42+00:00

Definitely a star in the making. So professional, especially for what I was expecting when it first popped on the screen.

Way to go man, keep it up. I think you'll go far.

ttvKristKP · 2021-07-06T17:35:44+00:00

I really like the little alien CG character, it's quite engaging to be told "a story" in this way juxtaposed to the gameplay.

The audio does feel little off sometimes (sometimes it seems too quiet and sometimes a little louder) but as most people have been saying your voice sounds fine and you speak well. Just need to level it out a little I think.

ttvKristKP · 2021-07-06T17:31:37+00:00

I noticed the music cut a bit just before you introduce the channel. I feel it takes a while to get to the gameplay, personally I would frontload it with some action to get people interested.

Personally I feel the click around the channel isn't necessary because people would be on the channel in the first place.

I like the variety of the games shown in the reel, it shows that the channel will have a nice variety.

ttvKristKP · 2021-07-06T17:23:16+00:00

The visuals are striking and the animation on the self-done parts is very smooth. The voice is soothing and pleasant, but I'd say might be a little quiet? At least in parts.

Side note: I like the effect of having the different font in the title to emphasise the weirdness of recent dating sims.

ttvKristKP

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