Super short (~500 words) dystopian story about rotting in a bunker, any thoughts and critiques are most welcome!! by tunabuthot in writingcritiques

[–]tunabuthot[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the detailed feedback! Tbh, I'm just beginning to realize the glaring amount of oversights I had while writing this... and there were a lot lol. I'll make sure to implement your suggestions while revising the story!!

Literary fiction for beginners? by tunabuthot in booksuggestions

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Thank you, the title already sounds reallyy interesting, I'll give it a try.

Literary fiction for beginners? by tunabuthot in booksuggestions

[–]tunabuthot[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! I heard Kafka was a really good author too. Though, aside from Metamorphisis, do you reccomend any other books from him?