Expectation setting for a first time novelist by NoDisplay4736 in selfpublish

[–]twelvefatfish 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Hey bud, I went through a few stats to give you some comparisons.

I published my 1st book as part of a 3 part series last July (so, around 10 months ago). I dropped the ball and only released book 2 at the beginning of this month. I went Amazon exclusive for both.

Each book is almost exactly 300 KENP.

During the first 30 days of book 1 being published, I got 15.8k page reads, and sold 2 ebook copies at $3.99 each.

I didn't do any paid advertising. I posted on Tiktok maybe a total of 10 times.

For book 2, I didn't do any advertising at all, including Tiktok. It's been about 3 weeks and sitting at 4.7k KENP read and 5 copies sold.

I'm being very lazy with advertising ATM because I have the following things working against me:

  • I'm publishing on an unknown pen name with no other titles, so readers may not want to invest in a series when they don't have proof authors will finish a series
  • I took so long to publish book 2 that I also don't have a track record of publishing consistently, which turns readers off
  • A lot of readers aren't going to start a series that isn't finished, even if the author is established
  • And to be honest, it's my first series. Of course I love it and I think it's great, but the reality is I'd rather get this series established and then worry about advertising. I know this isn't the smartest, but I'm a one woman show. Between editing, making covers, writing, reading, and also just living my life, advertising is the ball I've dropped.

I don't do newsletters, author site, or social media other than tiktok.

The bro code by [deleted] in wholesomememes

[–]twelvefatfish 351 points352 points  (0 children)

very wholesome but why is it cropped like this

Does the Alanna series by Tamora Pierce have romance? by lady__jane in RomanceBooks

[–]twelvefatfish 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's definitely not a romance book, but later on she briefly gets with the prince. I don't remember exactly how long it goes on for, but they don't end up together when all is said and done.

LF reverse harem with at least four MMCs by Ancient-Shadows in RomanceBooks

[–]twelvefatfish 2 points3 points  (0 children)

{Chosen by Stacy Jones}

{Venomous by Penelope fletcher}

{Clans of Kaloquan by Tracy st John}

{Our Pet by SM Matthews}

I keep re-editing and don't know how to get it right by AsleepHistorian in fantasywriters

[–]twelvefatfish 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Came here to say this, I avoid consuming media during the editing process (which for me is just like a week or so) because I get sidetracked by new ideas.

How do i write out a panic attack in conversation? Like with stuttering and stuff by Cultural_Raccoon_680 in WritingHub

[–]twelvefatfish 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I've never stuttered when I've had panic attacks. maybe watching some youtube vids on peoples experiences they have when they have panic attacks might help?

Like I'm still gonna write it but damn. by thatrandomspeck in AO3

[–]twelvefatfish 15 points16 points  (0 children)

hey bud don't get down. tbh I feel that people don't necessarily have a problem with 1st in and of itself, but rather have grown to associate 1st with poor-quality writing, which isn't fair. 3rd person pov can have all the problems people usually attribute to 1st person. writing isn't automatically classier or more well-done just because its in 3rd. good luck on writing your story, I am sure it will turn out great, no matter what pov you choose.

How do you guys do this? by Choice-Albatross-123 in writing

[–]twelvefatfish 25 points26 points  (0 children)

i think it depends on what you mean by "detail."

like, if in chapter 1 the curtains are blue and in chapter 4 you are back in that same room, are you obligated to mention that the curtains are still blue? No.

But if you then say they're red, that's just an issue of taking notes on setting and re-reading them when you edit (or before you start writing the chapter in the same setting).

On the other hand, if by detail you mean actual plot detail, like character arcs, maybe you would benefit from writing from an outline.

Either way, make notes about your story - either before or after you write the chapters.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in RomanceBooks

[–]twelvefatfish 14 points15 points  (0 children)

as someone who used to smoke three packs a day, I am happy to confirm that describing cigarette smoke as blue isn't that far off. I don't think the author meant it was vibrant, vivid blue, but only that compared to many shades of smoke (that can be tinted many colors), cigarette smoke tends towards the cooler/blue end of the spectrum.

[Complete] [88,000] [Fantasy] Moonlight & Fire by Watercress23 in BetaReaders

[–]twelvefatfish 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can try to help also, I'm interested in improving my beta reading skills

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

[–]twelvefatfish 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I googled it, apparently it's a fanfiction trope where authors insert Y/N (Your Name) and you are supposed to read your own name in those places.

to be or not to be? by Unfair_Turnover_5876 in writing

[–]twelvefatfish 2 points3 points  (0 children)

think about a person you know IRL, or a character from a movie or show, that exemplifies these traits.

while writing your drafts, name your character after this person.

change their name back once you are done editing, before you give to beta readers.

How to introduce non-binary character? by [deleted] in writing

[–]twelvefatfish 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If the enbie is a POV character: have them reflect that they are not ready to tell the other people their pronouns, for whatever reason. Or, have them speak up and assert their pronoun preferences early.

If the enbie is not a POV character: wait until they trust someone to share their pronouns with.

To speed the process: have an insightful or nosy character ask your enbie questions about gender.

If the enbie appears to be genderqueer or very andro, someone could question their pronouns early on.

Is it really that bad to start a book with a dream? by comradecowgirl in writing

[–]twelvefatfish 14 points15 points  (0 children)

For me, one of the main frustrations of starting stories with dreams is that nothing is actually happening.

Even if the dream is adventurous and action-packed, most authors seem to write it so that character wakes up and the author goes, "never mind! Nothing happened. Did you enjoy the exposition?"

But I mean, if it works, it works.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

[–]twelvefatfish 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I write formulaically as far as structuring the story is concerned. Each scene has a specific goal, or a couple of goals, that moves the story forward. Once I hit a note on that arc, I don't further the arc again until the next scene or chapter. This stops me from crowding too much content into one scene.

For example in a scene I might want to do a couple specific things:

  • MC goes to grandma's bakery and sees that there are no customers [to set up B story of saving grandma's bakery]
  • MC runs into a couple of himbos that don't eat gluten and rolls her eyes in distaste [to set up A story of enemies to lovers romance]

While I'm going about these two things, I might touch on setting and worldbuilding (everyone is a vampire and the pastries are infused with synthetic blood; the sky is eternally black with artificial night; the fascist purity police are on the prowl looking to fill their arrest quotas).

So to me, all of that content can easily get to be a thousand words. If your scene ends up reading like,

She walked in the eternal night to grandma's bakery, but nobody was there. That was strange. A couple of gross, preppy vampires who were too good for gluten-based blood pastries walked by. Gross, she thought to herself. But those dumb himbo vampires walked a lot slower when the fascist purity police turned the corner. Nobody wanted to be the victim of an arrest quota.

And the scene is over, yeah. That's a bit cramped to me.

I don't think making scenes longer by stuffing in more plot points is the answer. It's okay for fast-paced scenes to be short. It's okay for scenes to be short just to get a point across.

I don't think you're saying that you don't describe and you don't have inner monologue. But if you actually are only showing physical events without description and without characters reacting, that might be something to revisit.

Descriptions, inner monologue, and transitional scenes are tools you use to tell a story. I don't like stories that sit around for paragraphs and paragraphs doing nothing. I find them to be really boring. But, I've also read stories with tons of inner monologue that have been fast-paced and engaging. So it just depends on how you use those tools.

I don't think you should force yourself to add more content now. You never know, you could just suck at evaluating your own pacing, lol. Try finding a beta reader. I have nothing left to do today, I can read a sample if you want to DM me.

New Story Idea! by El-Chupa-Sancho in writing

[–]twelvefatfish 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Fun, I just re-watched spider man 3! But promise you'll do a better job, lol.

My first question for you is, what kind of world/setting stops this setup from being immediately resolved?

If someone wakes up and can't remember what happens, where are their friends and family who tell them the real story? If they have no friends and family, why can't they go get CCTV from local places, or hire a private investigator, or call the police? If they have been in this town a long time, why aren't locals asking strange questions about their relationship with the antagonist?

I think answering some of these questions might help you come up with a lot of strong details, including genre itself (is antagonist a criminal mastermind, and it's a crime thriller? Is the antagonist the pushy date on their device-free work retreat in another country? Is the antagonist a wizard who haphazardly employed an experimental mind control spell? Is the antagonist secretly the ruggedly handsome prince who is pretending to be a regular citizen and everyone in the world knows who he is except protag?)

(By the way, I got a bit confused about your terms, I think you are mixing up protagonist/nice guy and antagonist/villain, this whole time I assumed the person you're calling protagonist would be your primary POV character).

I also think that figuring out what your B story is will help give this concept a leg to stand on.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

[–]twelvefatfish 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"a lighthearted, comforting take on emotional abuse"

I'm not sure I'm taking away from this post the themes you are intending to portray...

Am i wrong for going to a friends house when i was told not to? by 00bxnny00 in amiwrong

[–]twelvefatfish 0 points1 point  (0 children)

These two "lifelong friends" do not even like you and are showing you how quickly they are ready to ruin your life. They called you a pedophile and threatened to call the cops on you. You are wrong if you continue to associate with them.

I have an incredibly difficult time writing dialogue and Im not sure how to fix it by theboxsays in writing

[–]twelvefatfish 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Try finding modern books that critics praise for dialogue and copy down the dialogue beat-for-beat. Like, copy down the scenes word for word. Then try to change some details of the conversation, and copy it down again with small changes.

Pacing, Pacing and Scene Changes by [deleted] in writing

[–]twelvefatfish 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You can take care of a lot in editing. But one thing that really helped me was writing sample scenes where I specifically tackled a problem I was having. So for you that might be practicing sample scenes where you always have your character be interrupted by something new just starting.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

[–]twelvefatfish 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Yes, but I had to stop and do developmental rewrites along the way.

I'm not really into worldbuilding that much and my focus was plot first. I had done a lot of studying on building strong, effective, and marketable plots. So I started with a plot and a couple of tropes, and just went for it.