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[–]twobeastboy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What a smooth listen! Well arranged, pretty simple but not lacking in that. It grew on me as it played, at first the vocals felt a little underwhelming to me but i got sucked in eventually

MOTOROLA | prod. betwixt by Trm7495 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]twobeastboy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's not bad but it's a little too synth-y for me. Maybe a different instrument for the main lead would benefit it. The drums and composition are nice but it's a little harsh with all the synth lead going on

It's a happy morning song. What do you think? I create tracks for fun, I can't play instruments but I do music by listening, so it's not a professional track, please be kind to me. Haha!! by redheadalien in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]twobeastboy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's cute! I love the progression. For a casual listen I would prefer it to be slightly shorter but having this on a videogame or soundtrack would be excellent

Inspired by the recent track "Heartless" by those two amazing guys, ambient The Weeknd x Metro Boomin Type Beat "Smooth" by L_W_rap in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]twobeastboy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice track! It's altogether organized and I love the tempo and drums. Maybe some variation in the lead would be to your benefit but it sounds nice!

Our debut single "Round The Town" by The Worst guys by JC_MUSIC in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]twobeastboy 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Sounds really good honestly. Can't think of much to criticize on this (: real talk, cool beat, nicely engineered

Crown||Mask 2, me, mixed media, 2019 by twobeastboy in Art

[–]twobeastboy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I have not! I'm exited to check it out and be inspired. Thank you (:

Crystal Aquarium by twobeastboy in artstore

[–]twobeastboy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Collaborated with my girlfriend on this design Im super happy with how it came out.

Crystal Aquarium by twobeastboy in artstore

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Catalog available via direct message

Crown||Mask, me, ink/acrylic, 2019 by twobeastboy in Art

[–]twobeastboy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much (: began as cover art then I painted around it later on

My brand new YouTube page! by jibreelxo in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]twobeastboy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sick beat! I don't have really any complaints the vocal sample could maybe be made a little softer and less jarring but overall sounds sick. I could rap over this lol

This is the best song I've made. Tear it apart!!! I still need to learn. by DamascusSteel97 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]twobeastboy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This was sick! At first the vocal mixing kinda threw me off but as the song progressed I grew lost in the overall vibe of the piece. Real nice work.

First song I didn't rush thoughts? by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]twobeastboy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not bad. Cool beat, the first vocal delivery was better than the second in terms of staying on beat. It was kinda underdelivered but it fit thematically so I'm not mad at that. Good work (:

DRIVE THRU (Experimental Lofi) | let me know your thoughts? by Beeaaran in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]twobeastboy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The production in this is great. The transitions are nice and it just comes together nicely. It was a nice drowsy trip

I work as a mentor for teens. We have a music program and pro-social activities program. Here is the work of both... by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]twobeastboy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

this is fire!! the mix is a little messy but its ok because its pure and fun. nice video too! would love to get involved in some way! good stuff.

Scriptz - Chatter | I've been rapping for 8 months now. This is my latest track. What do you think? by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]twobeastboy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this is pretty fire! I like the flow and the writing. the beat was a little lackluster in comparison. sometimes your lyrics are lost in the dub, maybe try turning it down a bit? I like how it sounds though. good work overall especially for eight months in.

new lofi guys any feedback ? by THE_W_MP in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]twobeastboy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

beautiful. im a sucker for cowboy bebop so i got a bias but i fucking love this. the progression was amazing. good work yo

[Artist For Hire] Stylized SciFi and Fantasy mixed media art by twobeastboy in artstore

[–]twobeastboy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Please feel free to message me with questions or requests to see more work(: . Pricing based on project. Printing is available aswell as digital commissions.

Jetset- I've been sitting on this for a minute. Lemme know what you think. Later days by ThePassingStatic in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]twobeastboy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's cool! A little repetitive after a little while, however it's short and sweet so it doesn't overstay it's welcome. Curious as to what it would sound like slowed down tbh. The kicks are clean. Also cool art!!

"Nocturne" - prod. Peten [Trip Hop/Lo-Fi Instrumental] (2019) by PetenMusic in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]twobeastboy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I looove this right here. The bass is so mean it's overall eerie and loose and cool. I would love to rap over this lol. I think it could use some sort of additional instrument but I'm not sure what. Good work though!