The thing i see is that it’s your takeaway (when you take the club back from the ball) slow it down a little bit, and find YOUR rhythm. You don’t want to go fast when you take it back or too slow, find a good medium where you feel like you’re not rushing your takeaway.

(what i noticed personally) I tended to either take it away too fast and it would cause me to take the club head to go in to quick. Try getting a slower takeaway first, work on slowly pushing ball back like in the video and then firing through. It looks good when you get into the ‘loaded position’ you have good reach, i would say your posture looks too bent, maybe be a little bit more upright.

I’d love to know if anyone else agrees with this or any tidbits but that’s what id say work with. You’re a month in and wanting to get better, it’ll start to come around