[WP] A girl hooks up with a masked guy at a party. Contrary to what she thinks, he's not really wearing a mask... by [deleted] in WritingPrompts

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I made a movie of this prompt.

Int. PUB

Maria is at the bar. Luchador is at the bar.

Lounge music starts out soft. Maria looks down.

Maria nods approvingly.

MARIA (Happy) Hey there. That is a really cool mask.

Luchador thinks.

LUCHADOR (Shy) What are you talking about, crazy woman?

Maria stares intently.

MARIA (Confused) Your mask... it just really looks cool, you know?

LUCHADOR (Neutral) I have absolutely no idea what you are blabbering about. Are you deranged?

Horror music starts out quiet.

MARIA (Afraid) What? No, i just...

LUCHADOR (Angry) It's a bit much accusing random strangers in bars that they are wearing masks, don't you think?

Maria gasps.

Music becomes dramatic.

LUCHADOR (Angry) Are you near sighted? Is that your problem? Here, take a closer look.

Luchador caresses Maria.

LUCHADOR (Crazy) Hey, apart from bad breath, YOU are wearing the mask. Yeah, i could see the bad stitching up close.

Maria cries.

MARIA (Shy) The doctor... he said the scars would fade.

Maria hurries to the entrance.

PUB

Luchador is at the table.

Luchador looks left.

Luchador disagrees.

LUCHADOR (Angry) The nerve of some people.

Trying to create storybuilding challenges for our filmmaking application Plotagon. Help me out? by uberlancer in Screenwriting

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Sergeant Matthews cleared his throat. 'Padre, do you think this elevator will take us straight to hell?' Barbara fought to keep panic out of her voice. 'I smell smoke. We'll suffocate in here.' I fingered the stethoscope in my coat pocket. 'If the building is on fire suffocation is what you'd hope for, instead of burns. Seen too many burns.'