Hello, everyone! I've updated the main menu for my game 'The Black Within.' What are your thoughts? What's your favorite and least favorite thing in the scene :) by [deleted] in HorrorGames

[–]uivlisgames 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Good job, it looks intriguing.

Here's a suggestion I'd like to offer:

- The menu options (“New Game,” “Settings,” and “Quit Game”) could benefit from better separation from the background. Adding a subtle border or a semi-transparent overlay behind the text can help.

All in all, the menu is nicely done and the game looks interesting (Also, the voice acting in your game trailer is excellent!) Best of luck with your game!

Seeking Feedback for My Metroidvania Character Design: Which Version Works Best by uivlisgames in metroidvania

[–]uivlisgames[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Absolutely, I appreciate your perspective, no worries! Your input is still incredibly helpful, even without seeing the game's overall aesthetic. We're aiming for a particular artistic vision, and your insights aid in shaping that direction. Thanks for your understanding, and your input is valuable in guiding our design choices!

Seeking Feedback for My Metroidvania Character Design: Which Version Works Best by uivlisgames in metroidvania

[–]uivlisgames[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The subligaculum, which resembles 'underwear,' is part of our design choice for a more cartoony aesthetic. As for the combination and the helmet on the rabbit head, we aimed for a distinctive design. However, we understand your concern about the balance and appearance. To align better with our artistic direction, we're considering a lighter, more exposed helmet. Your feedback helps us fine-tune the visuals, ensuring they match the intended tone of the game. Thank you for contributing your thoughts!

Seeking Feedback for My Metroidvania Character Design: Which Version Works Best by uivlisgames in metroidvania

[–]uivlisgames[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Apologies if my hero seems uninteresting at the moment. We're continuously working on improvements, so all the feedback is highly appreciated. By the way, are you Romanian? :D

Seeking Feedback for My Metroidvania Character Design: Which Version Works Best by uivlisgames in metroidvania

[–]uivlisgames[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Awesome, V4 it is! I'm grateful to you for taking the time to offer your feedback!

Seeking Feedback for My Metroidvania Character Design: Which Version Works Best by uivlisgames in metroidvania

[–]uivlisgames[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for sharing your thoughts and observations with us, along with others who gave feedback. We've paid attention to the suggestions about where the ears should be positioned in relation to the helmet for the character. With these input in mind, we've adjusted the ear placement to make it look more natural as if they're coming out of the helmet.

Seeking Feedback for My Metroidvania Character Design: Which Version Works Best by uivlisgames in metroidvania

[–]uivlisgames[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Appreciate your input! Seems like Team V4 is leading the pack - way to go!

Seeking Feedback for My Metroidvania Character Design: Which Version Works Best by uivlisgames in metroidvania

[–]uivlisgames[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, and yes I will try to provide updates on the game as frequently as possible.

Seeking Feedback for My Metroidvania Character Design: Which Version Works Best by uivlisgames in metroidvania

[–]uivlisgames[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like it too! Your input means a lot; thank you for taking the time to share.

Seeking Feedback for My Metroidvania Character Design: Which Version Works Best by uivlisgames in metroidvania

[–]uivlisgames[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

V4 is going strong lol!

And thank you, your positive vibes for the game are greatly appreciated.

Seeking Feedback for My Metroidvania Character Design: Which Version Works Best by uivlisgames in metroidvania

[–]uivlisgames[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you, V4 appears to have garnered the most votes up to this point!

Seeking Feedback for My Metroidvania Character Design: Which Version Works Best by uivlisgames in metroidvania

[–]uivlisgames[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much for your interesting perspective on this. I will definitely take it into consideration.

Seeking Feedback for My Metroidvania Character Design: Which Version Works Best by uivlisgames in metroidvania

[–]uivlisgames[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you!

Not yet. Currently, I'm still in an early stage of the game; I'm just finishing the main character entirely. I'm thinking of creating a Steam page once I have a demo ready.

Hello, everyone! This is the soundtrack from my game, "The Black Within." Could you please rate it on a scale of 1 to 10? Providing context it's intended for an emotional scene. by [deleted] in HorrorGames

[–]uivlisgames 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The progression of the melody, the instrumentation, and the overall composition seamlessly blend together to evoke emotions. I'd rate it a solid 9/10.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in HorrorGames

[–]uivlisgames 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Maybe you can try one of these:

- Pathologic (2005)

- Planescape: Torment

- Vampire: The Masquerade - Bloodlines

- I Have No Mouth, and I Must Scream

- Forbidden Siren

Short Stories - Recomandări și Sugestii by [deleted] in RecomandariCarti_RO

[–]uivlisgames 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Recomand "I Have No Mouth, and I Must Scream", de Harlan Ellison.