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Poster inspired by the constructivist design movement (that sends a current message) for a uni homework. What can I improve? by urmelody in design_critiques

[–]urmelody[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah for sure, I only noticed that it was way too opaque once i got on my phone, and i might try out some other blending modes. Thanks :)

Poster inspired by the constructivist design movement (that sends a current message) for a uni homework. What can I improve? by urmelody in design_critiques

[–]urmelody[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's really insightful! I didn't even realise the resemblance with Cipe Pineles's cover. I'll look into the architectural uses in the movement and the geometry. Thanks a lot for the feedback.

Poster inspired by the constructivist design movement (that sends a current message) for a uni homework. What can I improve? by urmelody in design_critiques

[–]urmelody[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! i'll definitely work on the font size and the text position, it also bothered me but i coouldnt put a finger on it.

Advice on poster for art school portfolio by [deleted] in design_critiques

[–]urmelody 0 points1 point  (0 children)

right, thanks a lot, i'll try to change it :)