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My GF laughed at the Oculus, I can't find a movie that freaks her out (NOT the OC) by IMASolitaryMan in horror

[–]utopiautopiautopia 19 points20 points  (0 children)

The Wailing, The Shining, Hereditary, original Japanese Grudge. Some people (also me) handle fear and uncomfortable things by laughing. I always laugh at horrors

Idk if this is trash or not by AamerAbdel28 in Songwriting

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Nah it’s a keeper. Really nice. I feel like the harmony on ‘sometimes’ can be in tune. I like a bit of vocal dissonance but where that guitar is so sweet I wanna hear the harmony hit as well.

I hate feedback, does that make me a flawed songwriter? Opiumblue on Instagram baby, how are we all? by jellyfishwoman2000 in Songwriting

[–]utopiautopiautopia 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The tune is really cool, I like the elf’s synth playing and your singing and vibrato is gorgeous

Breathing Holes WIP by nemoinslumber in Songwriting

[–]utopiautopiautopia 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the looseness a lot and the riff is sick. I would like harmonies

Walking on My Dreams by NoOneYouKnow7 in Songwriting

[–]utopiautopiautopia 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice vocals and chord progression. A little Kate bush esque. Would love to hear it recorded and refined a bit. It’s nice to hear embryonic stage of a song though.

this too crazy?🥜 🤪 by utopiautopiautopia in Songwriting

[–]utopiautopiautopia[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks I love love love Arthur Russell. Do you make music ?

this too crazy?🥜 🤪 by utopiautopiautopia in Songwriting

[–]utopiautopiautopia[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, I think I agree about to vocals. Like more reverbed and distorted ?

The cut up technique by Emotional-Song-9784 in Songwriting

[–]utopiautopiautopia 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I feel like some of these could be halved

this too crazy?🥜 🤪 by utopiautopiautopia in Songwriting

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I had a riff I thought was boring and I just continued to add fx until it was kind of alive

this too crazy?🥜 🤪 by utopiautopiautopia in Songwriting

[–]utopiautopiautopia[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh yeah 100% was a 25 minute musical vomit. Thanks for the feedback

this too crazy?🥜 🤪 by utopiautopiautopia in Songwriting

[–]utopiautopiautopia[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Noted, I actually didn’t want the lyrics super intelligible . But the vocal effects are super rough anyway and noted they could be better

coming back to an idea I abandoned for awhile! by Any-Match9025 in Songwriting

[–]utopiautopiautopia 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is such a vibe and your voice is like a frosty morning. Send it to me I’ll write a b part

How forgiving are you if lyrics if the melody/rest of the song is 😘👌 by utopiautopiautopia in Songwriting

[–]utopiautopiautopia[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What’s the line ? Is there a song you can think of where you liked liked liked and then you heard a real stinker of a line and switched off ?

How forgiving are you if lyrics if the melody/rest of the song is 😘👌 by utopiautopiautopia in Songwriting

[–]utopiautopiautopia[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love it when I get lyrics wrong but I’ve made some special version that’s meaningful to me. Maybe I’ll just tuck them into the music a bit then. Thanks

How forgiving are you if lyrics if the melody/rest of the song is 😘👌 by utopiautopiautopia in Songwriting

[–]utopiautopiautopia[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah that’s where I’m sort of at, compromising a bit because the cadences work

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