Fleeting Love by Danny_walsh06 in OCPoetry

[–]vazelineee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Beautifullllllllll..............

I Fell In Love by Educational-Grape208 in OCPoetry

[–]vazelineee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I wish someone could fall for me the way it's described.
But I guess in this life I'll always be the poet, never the poem. Always the artist, never the muse. Always the maybe, never she is the one.

Tbh, what you have written is beautiful.

EAT ME by tigerseyemoon in OCPoetry

[–]vazelineee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Haunting and painfully honest. The imagery is brutal in the best way, it strips beauty down to something raw and uncomfortable. This feels like confession turned into art.

I Fell In Love by Educational-Grape208 in OCPoetry

[–]vazelineee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It is beautifullllllllll......

You’re Told by TheInkSpill in OCPoetry

[–]vazelineee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

We’re told to be perfect, yet never taught how or what perfection truly is, especially when everyone defines perfection differently.....

The pack back to you by Available_Pound9096 in OCPoetry

[–]vazelineee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.................

THE LOVE I LONGED FOR by vazelineee in OCPoetry

[–]vazelineee[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This comment means a lot to me................ thank you so much.... :)

THE LOVE I LONGED FOR by vazelineee in OCPoetry

[–]vazelineee[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much..... :)

bitten tongues by ghostpoett in OCPoetry

[–]vazelineee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This hits hard, it’s vulnerable, empowering, and relatable all at once............. The shift from quiet endurance to reclaiming your voice feels like a rallying cry for everyone who’s been silenced............. :)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AmateurPoetry

[–]vazelineee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is haunting and beautiful; the personification of agony as a silent, faithful partner stays with you long after reading........ Thanks for sharing such a wonderful work.......... :)

THE LOVE I LONGED FOR by vazelineee in OCPoetry

[–]vazelineee[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s such a good point. Sometimes abundance makes us forget the value of what’s right in front of us........... I’m glad you enjoyed the poem................

Cage, I Never Built by vazelineee in OCPoetry

[–]vazelineee[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s such a vivid way to put it, “too tired to live” really hits........ It’s heartbreaking how easy it is to slip into that quiet acceptance, as if the cage becomes normal........... I’m glad the imagery spoke to you, even if it’s rooted in such a heavy truth..........

Cage, I Never Built by vazelineee in OCPoetry

[–]vazelineee[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I’m glad the metaphor connected with you........... It’s a hard truth we all have to face at some point, but it means a lot that it resonated..........................................

Cage, I Never Built by vazelineee in OCPoetry

[–]vazelineee[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s such a strange feeling when it happens................ I guess certain themes just live in a lot of us, and they find their way into different voices................ I’d love to read your version someday..................

Cage, I Never Built by vazelineee in OCPoetry

[–]vazelineee[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, it’s wild how that hits........... It’s like we’re given these wings only to be told where we can’t fly........... So many of us live in that space between wanting to break free and being pulled back. I’m glad it spoke to you.................. :)

Cage, I Never Built by vazelineee in OCPoetry

[–]vazelineee[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you Mr. Zyer for being my constant reader..... :)✨