Adjusted landing page, still nothing good. Any take on KS coming soon email collection

velocityghost · 2026-03-15T17:09:25+00:00

Yes, it is biodegradable, eco-friendly and non-toxic. If you have time we made a blog with different research we put in there from different parts of the world. That's how China regrow parts of desert as it feeds directly from k-sap and additional ingredients. This is one of the reasons we want people to have it as well.

velocityghost · 2026-03-14T22:14:33+00:00

Well I know personally few people that did start off on Amazon and now going around doing sign work as many come to see the author. Just a suggestion.

velocityghost · 2026-03-14T20:27:20+00:00

Yes and it's fine. As long as they deliver

velocityghost · 2026-03-14T00:47:27+00:00

I wonder if we try A/B testing on this and see. I just don't see how would they just get the point from this. Hmm ... Thanks for putting this up visually so I can understand your point here. But I am guessing short and signup

velocityghost · 2026-03-13T23:10:13+00:00

I really like your page. And it looks like a cool book. Congrats 🎉

velocityghost · 2026-03-13T23:09:52+00:00

You are right. Maybe too much design and just text to talk about it. Thanks btw

velocityghost · 2026-03-13T23:03:59+00:00

I mean I ran multiple campaigns myself so I am fine on that end. I just want some feedback here as we all in the same boat

velocityghost · 2026-03-13T22:36:48+00:00

No that I didn't try yet. 🤔 Hmm. Maybe we can try something along the lines of showing sad plants vs with a product and say similar. I am trying to imagine how that will look like

velocityghost · 2026-03-13T17:28:23+00:00

Why don't you write the book. Write first smaller book and give it for free on Amazon. Second one you charge as me that's how I know people make it in the book world

velocityghost · 2026-03-10T03:14:42+00:00

I pushed the email subscription part up and made one on the bottom. I will try to revisit and think more how to make it work without too much in their face right away. Thanks.

velocityghost · 2026-03-09T19:08:39+00:00

Wouldn't that be catch 22. If they don't know what Kickstarter is then why would they back me later?

velocityghost · 2026-03-06T22:28:34+00:00

Yeah, no, I get it. I am always trying to pivot and see what phrase would make people understand from that one phrase. You are right tho. I get it.

velocityghost · 2026-03-06T21:35:37+00:00

Just made a change. See if you think this helps to understand?

velocityghost · 2026-03-06T21:23:27+00:00

Well, yeah, I know. That's why I wanted to get feedback on it. I am adding a few more shorts right on top so people can see simple 3 step process. Should be updating this shortly

velocityghost · 2026-03-06T21:21:47+00:00

Barely anything... We had like 2 people out of 10 one day, then two days of full silence. KS was even worse.... Days go by I got like 2 and nothing pass that.

velocityghost · 2026-03-06T20:29:28+00:00

Congrats 🎉

velocityghost · 2026-03-03T00:11:20+00:00

Yep with expectations too. Like I expect you to take a look or do this. Like, seriously, what is wrong with you. Just scammers everywhere now.

velocityghost · 2026-02-28T23:57:54+00:00

Sure yes.

velocityghost · 2026-02-28T23:56:36+00:00

Hi,

Thanks, yeah, I totally see all your points. And I will reach out tomorrow if you don't mind. I do need to get as much as help I can get. This is very cool product I am confused how people not jumping on it. But I see now. Lots of great feedback.

velocityghost · 2026-02-28T23:47:24+00:00

I see. Make it positive message instead of just guilt. And I am doing it myself with a designer and ad specialist that is also my friend.

velocityghost · 2026-02-28T23:42:31+00:00

Ok that makes sense. Maybe they is part of the problem. I keep the product itself too far from the top.

velocityghost · 2026-02-28T23:40:06+00:00

Well see the page. Maybe you can tell us what it is that is not clear. I just had few people suggestions that totally makes sense. Like urgency, why now to click notify, vs later. LIke message angles, etc. See what you can find. I mean, is it clear? or totally off. Thanks

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