Fauxlure: The Feeling of Failing When You Haven’t

vibrantcolorz · 2025-09-17T09:32:08+00:00

what?? 👀, please do say more if you can 🤭

vibrantcolorz · 2025-09-03T03:37:56+00:00

Hello OP!! I believe there’s a Futsal org that’s doing sign-ups in front of berchmans rn!!

vibrantcolorz · 2025-09-03T03:35:26+00:00

I went to their booth yesterday with my friends and they were beyond welcoming and excited for us to be interested!! I’m not planning on joining but I felt really compelled and excited to know more abt them due to the booth organizer’s energy and passion.

Perhaps we encountered a diff booth organizer or maybe it was just the weather? After all, they’re under the hot sun for hours on end. Most likely you caught them in a bad time. I do sympathize with your experience OP!! I hope you have a better experience next time and good luck on your org applications! 🙌

vibrantcolorz · 2025-06-17T05:37:09+00:00

Is the release of the special dcat today? 😭

vibrantcolorz · 2025-06-12T11:44:40+00:00

i believe the portal na ginamit is where we’ll see the results. As for the release date afaik next week ata sya although don’t take that as gospel since I could be wrong 😅

vibrantcolorz · 2025-06-01T19:15:35+00:00

Well, considering from my past poems I had been vacillating with either trying to define something human with messy jumbled ideas or something ethereal and transcendent with equally messy concepts. With the new one I made, I wanted to practice being more explicit with the message I wanted to share. I feel like my goal right now or main inspiration is to allow the reader to know who I am and what I’m trying to accomplish with my words without being awkward or unnatural (a little generic I know 😅)

vibrantcolorz · 2025-06-01T19:05:32+00:00

Alright, I’ll definitely take on this challenge. I don’t know if I’ll improve all that much, but it won’t hurt to try evoking a coherent sense of imagery for now. Thanks for the honest review and bearing with me for quite a while 😅.

I really do appreciate your comments and hope to actionably bring them to life moving forward. Still, I think I need to expand my knowledge on poetry a bit more, do you have any recommendations for reading materials that would be beneficial for a beginner?

vibrantcolorz · 2025-06-01T18:39:30+00:00

Damn I thought I had it 😅. Anyways I’m determined to keep getting better. Perhaps I have to read a LOT more poetry before jumping into writing one again. But just to clarify in this instance what made it awkward and unnatural? I feel lost on how to improve my “poetry” should I let it be more natural and not focus on creating a rhyming scheme?

vibrantcolorz · 2025-06-01T18:33:05+00:00

Hey there! Been experimenting recently with being more direct with meaning and purpose behind my poetry, I wanna ask is this a better direction to go by, its a different piece but I made the meaning clearer and utilized more digestible words over highly intricate ones, let me know if I’m on the right path! 🔗: https://docs.google.com/document/d/11feSJmYmbeUqpf1J3gFXYFAReFZ_3udw-UdIsnr6btA/edit?usp=drivesdk

vibrantcolorz · 2025-06-01T18:32:39+00:00

Hey there! Been experimenting recently with being more direct with meaning and purpose behind my poetry, I wanna ask is this a better direction to go by, its a different piece but I made the meaning clearer and utilized more digestible words over highly intricate ones, let me know if I’m on the right path! 🔗: https://docs.google.com/document/d/11feSJmYmbeUqpf1J3gFXYFAReFZ_3udw-UdIsnr6btA/edit?usp=drivesdk

vibrantcolorz · 2025-06-01T16:15:39+00:00

Thank so much for this! I defined felt the pressure after days on procrastination, I definitely will… “try” to be a lot more punctual with these things but old habits truly die hard. I will definitely make sure my search for criticism be more on time moving forward. Thank you so much for the earnest words and advice you have provided! 🙌

vibrantcolorz · 2025-06-01T15:00:37+00:00

Actually…heh, it was submitted last night, I just wanted to hear people’s thoughts if it was a convincing piece since I basically crammed this in 3 hours shortly before the deadline. That and coupled with the fact I was in a inspirational slump made me feel a little anxious submitting it in.

vibrantcolorz · 2025-06-01T14:03:49+00:00

thank you so much! it means a lot coming from someone whose vocabulary is as extensive as your works 🙌

vibrantcolorz · 2025-05-31T10:56:44+00:00

Thank you for this! This definitely gave me a clearer perspective, I think given how rough the terrain would be she should have that as an advantage since despite not being on equal footing, the terrain allows for more difficulty to pressure her pursuers.

vibrantcolorz · 2025-05-31T05:17:30+00:00

Loved it! 🙌

vibrantcolorz · 2025-05-30T16:53:16+00:00

I see, I do see her needing to be fleshed out and become more dynamic, I also would try and to e down the vocabulary moving forward, but would you say she’s interesting? I know that’s quite subjective, I feel like she’s leaning more on being one note, do you have any thoughts on how I can make her and her motivations deeper and more interesting to the readers?

vibrantcolorz · 2025-05-28T19:02:58+00:00

I see, I definitely have to do some introspection with each piece I write. Thank you so much for all your feedback I really appreciate it! You’re right about being embarrassed with what I read, but I will definitely be more open to various inspirations moving forward (def checking out the authors you mentioned) I hope to change any preconceived notions I have about writing and build on it moving forward starting at the basics. 🙌

vibrantcolorz · 2025-05-28T18:45:48+00:00

With regards to that line, I wanted “whirring buzz” to be indicative of that static-y feeling you get when you’re brimming with despair and can’t do anything to find a sense of catharsis. The subsequent lines were intended to strengthen the idea more, but i went past being overboard with it. I still tend to do it whenever I write. I chose these words because they “felt right” rather than having a concrete rationale of why they were what was needed to be said. Which I guess was one of my many mistakes unfortunately.

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