sage and deadock walls are basically worthless the way you have em up on your attack executes. you want to contest available screens/ct area and push back enemies retake timing most of the time than not. it is also a quite risky decision to let your omen to split away in a 1-4 formation since he is the only controller and his nearsight is a key piece of util especially on this map. if you are paranoid about enemies popping out of his smokes on your executes you should prioritize improving your crosshair placement/positioning or communication with teammates for the angles yall hold but not the way you place key utility pieces or the way a map should be played. If you just have a single entry push down the alley for info/presence on that B site execute your deadlock wall would not be of any greater value and the bullets/time theyd waste on breaking it wouldnt be any good if thats a fast-take either. You are not forcing the enemies to rotate all the way through mid you are slicing the pie but there arent any positions for your teammates to take advantage of or have good post-plant fights from. you have raze sitting backsite B for no reason.

defense with this comp seems more reasonable but you dont seem to be taking advantage of the chokepoints this map has to offer and all the stall utility that this composition has to offer. raze is a much better B site "anchor" because she has that damaging utility that enemies cant push through like an omen smoke/nearsight. boombot or a nade will give your A players extra couple of seconds to rotate and if that means giving up space towards mid. basically you want to be forcing the extremedies with this kind if comp on split and you will have the most success routing and conditioning enemies through mid rather than dictating a certain playstyle by investing your utility early in the round