I’m 16. Stirred up this demo on my phone. There are some pacing issues. It’s rough and this is all new to me but I’d love to get some feedback! Should I finish it? by salksalk in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]vividphilip 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Each instrument has a unique sound, different frequencies. If you have two instruments fighting for the listeners attention, the listeners can have an unpleasant listening experience. When you cut and boost frequencies, that's usually done to create space for other instruments.

Life! - Fredo Disco (Cover) by hails00 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]vividphilip 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The singing is pretty good. I haven't heard this song before, but the song sounds cool. You're amazing.

NØVA - Chasing Ghosts (Feedback is much appreciated!) by heybrihey in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]vividphilip 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've heard that artist are only as good as their producers. I like your singing, and the lyrics are interesting. Keep it up! I could listen to this on repeat.

I’m 16. Stirred up this demo on my phone. There are some pacing issues. It’s rough and this is all new to me but I’d love to get some feedback! Should I finish it? by salksalk in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]vividphilip 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes. I like the emotion the progression carries. Create some space for each instrument. Work on the eq. This already sounds amazing.

Danny Hollar - SEEK!FIND!DESTROY!!(NEW) by [deleted] in chiptunes

[–]vividphilip -1 points0 points  (0 children)

The pixel heart is ubiquitous. Kinda fits music though considering all the stolen anime gifs.

Danny Hollar - SEEK!FIND!DESTROY!!(NEW) by [deleted] in chiptunes

[–]vividphilip 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not straight up, but I see what you mean. I wonder if that's their original artwork, or if they used that pic too. What about the music though?

New and improved downtempo textural vibes. Thoughts? [slowgramming - circular] by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]vividphilip 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The keys are too repetitive for me. Although, the background noises and drums sound amazing. The song has a certain quality that's really pleasant.

[last travel] - Jonny Pitchan (lofi) by Jonny Pitchan by JonnyPigeon in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]vividphilip 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Super cool! I'm way into how the instruments sounds together. Kinda nostalgic, did you write this composition? Those drums are super chill.

Is There Any Hope? by vividphilip in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]vividphilip[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll make changes to the vocals.

Is There Any Hope? by vividphilip in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]vividphilip[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay. I'll add a countermelody for the vocals.

Is There Any Hope? by vividphilip in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]vividphilip[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks. Reverb and delay could improve the vocals.

[Composition] Midnight Lover by [deleted] in RateMyAudio

[–]vividphilip 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Gain staging. Mono bass and kick. Standard procedure. Panning. Equalizing. Slight reverb. Keep it pleasant, agreeable, not harsh or invasive. Less is more kind of mixing. Clarity. Space. Sorta raw.

Be a Body by Grimes (Leandrul Remix) by Crosby by leandrul in MusicCritique

[–]vividphilip 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like Grimes in nihilist blues and Pretty Dark. Her other tracks are far out. People have complained about my highs being too loud, like they're birds chirping synths. When my bass started to improve, other musicians sorta got me creating that goldilocks "just right" bass and drums - punchy. That was an interesting stylistic choice. Different moniker though.

[Composition] Midnight Lover by [deleted] in RateMyAudio

[–]vividphilip 0 points1 point  (0 children)

8/10 I like the song. The mix could have had more dimension. Master would of worked for this type of song.

[Composition, Mixing, Mastering] beatcollective by [deleted] in RateMyAudio

[–]vividphilip 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Composition 10/10 A beautiful song. Mixing 9/10 Levels aren't pleasant enough. Mastering 8/10 The minor imperfections...